Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Жауабыңызда сөйлем құрылымы мен сөздерді дұрыс қолдану маңызды. Мысалы, 'washing machine' сөзін бірнеше рет қайталамаңыз, оның орнына синонимдерді немесе басқа сөздерді қолданыңыз. Сондай-ақ, сөйлемдерді қысқа әрі нақты етіп жасаңыз.

예시: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it is very practical. I believe every household should have one since it saves both time and money.

제안: Жауабыңызда грамматикалық қателерді түзету қажет. Мысалы, 'clothes to be clear' орнына 'clothes to be clean' деп айту керек. Сонымен қатар, сөйлемдерді логикалық түрде байланыстыру үшін байланыстыру сөздерін қолданыңыз.

예시: Yes, I strongly agree because both washing and sweeping machines are essential in daily life. They help us keep our clothes clean and our homes tidy, which is very important.

제안: Жауабыңызда сөздерді қайталамауға тырысыңыз және сөйлемдерді қысқа әрі нақты етіп жасаңыз. Мысалы, 'difficult difficult innovations' дегенді бір рет 'difficult innovations' деп айту жеткілікті. Сонымен қатар, сөйлемдерді байланыстыру үшін 'because' сияқты сөздерді дұрыс қолданыңыз.

예시: Actually, I usually don't read instructions before using new machines, which I realize is a bad habit. I plan to change this because instructions help me understand how the machine works and how to use it correctly.

제안: Жауабыңызда грамматикалық қателерді түзету қажет. Мысалы, 'how do not broke it' орнына 'how not to break it' деп айту керек. Сондай-ақ, сөйлемдерді қысқа әрі нақты етіп жасаңыз.

예시: Yes, I believe reading instructions is important because they are not a waste of time. They teach us how to use new machines properly and how to avoid breaking them.

× I think my favorite machine at home is washing machine because washing machine is really practical thing and in my point of view every house need to have one at least one washing machine because it saves lots of money and the time.

✓ I think my favorite machine at home is the washing machine because the washing machine is a really practical thing and, in my point of view, every house needs to have at least one washing machine because it saves lots of money and time.

The sentence has singular and plural issues: 'washing machine' should be preceded by 'the' to specify it, 'practical thing' needs an article 'a', 'every house need' should be 'every house needs' to agree in number, and 'at least one washing machine' is correct but was misplaced. Also, 'the time' should be 'time' without 'the' because it is uncountable here. Correcting these improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Yes, I strongly agree with this statement because both of these machines are important for our daily life and we need to use them every day because we want our clothes to be clear and look properly. So this is our essential things for us.

✓ Yes, I strongly agree with this statement because both of these machines are important for our daily life and we need to use them every day because we want our clothes to be clean and look proper. So these are essential things for us.

The phrase 'clothes to be clear' is incorrect; 'clear' should be 'clean' when referring to clothes. 'Look properly' is incorrect; 'properly' is an adverb and should be replaced with the adjective 'proper' to describe 'look'. Also, 'this is our essential things' is incorrect because 'things' is plural; it should be 'these are essential things'. These corrections fix singular/plural and adjective/adverb misuse.

× Actually, I don't read any instructions before using some difficult difficult innovations, but I think it's a bad habit and I need to get rid of this really soon, because instructions are important and thanks to them you can understand how all of this mechanism works and how to use it properly.

✓ Actually, I don't read any instructions before using some difficult innovations, but I think it's a bad habit and I need to get rid of it really soon, because instructions are important and thanks to them you can understand how all of this mechanism works and how to use it properly.

The repetition 'difficult difficult' is a mistake and should be corrected to a single 'difficult'. Also, 'get rid of this' should be 'get rid of it' because 'habit' is referred to by 'it'. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Actually, I don't read any instructions before using some difficult difficult innovations, but I think it's a bad habit and I need to get rid of this really soon, because instructions are important and thanks to them you can understand how all of this mechanism works and how to use it properly.

✓ Actually, I don't read any instructions before using some difficult innovations, but I think it's a bad habit and I need to get rid of it really soon, because instructions are important and thanks to them you can understand how all of this mechanisms work and how to use them properly.

The phrase 'all of this mechanism' is incorrect because 'mechanism' is singular but refers to multiple parts; it should be 'all of these mechanisms'. Also, 'how to use it properly' should be 'how to use them properly' to agree with plural 'mechanisms'. Correct use of articles and pronouns is necessary for clarity.

× Yes, I really do think so, because instructions are not just a waste of your time or just some useless piece of paper. Instructions are essential for learning how to use this new machine and how do not broke it.

✓ Yes, I really do think so, because instructions are not just a waste of your time or just some useless piece of paper. Instructions are essential for learning how to use this new machine and how not to break it.

The phrase 'how do not broke it' is grammatically incorrect. The correct form is 'how not to break it' because 'break' is the base form used after 'to' in infinitive constructions. This correction fixes verb form and sentence structure errors.