Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了主要观点，但语言不够自然，存在语法错误和重复。建议使用更准确的表达，避免重复，并且增加连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: My favourite machine at home is my computer because it allows me to learn various languages such as German, Spanish, and French. Moreover, I can access language resources from different parts of the world, which helps me improve my skills.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和拼写错误，表达不够连贯。建议注意时态和单复数形式，使用连接词使句子更连贯，并且避免拼写错误。

예시: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important nowadays because almost every family owns them. They save a lot of time and effort since we don't have to do all the cleaning manually, which makes our lives much more convenient.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议使用完整句子，避免口语化表达，逻辑上更连贯。

예시: Not usually. When I get a new machine, I try to figure out how to use it by myself first. However, if I find it difficult to operate or it doesn't work properly, then I will read the instructions carefully.

제안: 回答表达了观点，但句子结构重复且不够流畅。建议简化句子结构，使用连接词使表达更自然。

예시: Yes, I believe it is important to read the instructions when you buy a new machine. This helps you understand how to use it properly and avoid damaging it by following the step-by-step guidance.

× I think my favorite machine in my house would be my computer because I can access different language in different areas and also can learn different kind of language like German, Spanish and French.

✓ I think my favorite machine in my house would be my computer because I can access different languages in different areas and also can learn different kinds of languages like German, Spanish and French.

The word 'language' should be plural 'languages' because it refers to multiple languages. Similarly, 'kind of language' should be 'kinds of languages' to correctly express variety and quantity.

× That's mostly the things that I do in my computer.

✓ Those are mostly the things that I do on my computer.

'That's' is singular but refers to plural 'things', so it should be 'Those are'. Also, the preposition 'in' is incorrect here; 'on my computer' is the correct phrase.

× That's mostly the things that I do in my computer.

✓ Those are mostly the things that I do on my computer.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to using a computer; the correct preposition is 'on'.

× Yes, I think it's quite important because nowaday every family, they've got housing Mach, they've got washing machine and sweeping machine.

✓ Yes, I think it's quite important because nowadays every family has a washing machine and a sweeping machine.

The phrase 'nowaday' should be 'nowadays'. 'Housing Mach' is incorrect and should be 'washing machine'. Also, 'they've got' is redundant after 'every family'; use 'has' for singular subject. Articles 'a' are needed before singular countable nouns.

× Yes, I think it's quite important because nowaday every family, they've got housing Mach, they've got washing machine and sweeping machine.

✓ Yes, I think it's quite important because nowadays every family has a washing machine and a sweeping machine.

Singular nouns 'washing machine' and 'sweeping machine' need the indefinite article 'a' before them.

× It often very convenes for our life.

✓ It is often very convenient for our life.

The word 'convenes' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'convenient'. Also, the verb 'is' is missing before 'often'.

× It often very convenes for our life.

✓ It is often very convenient for our life.

The sentence is missing the verb 'is' to link the subject and adjective.

× Not really, because when I first got a machine I tried to workout myself.

✓ Not really, because when I first got a machine I tried to work it out myself.

The phrasal verb is 'work out', which should be separated; 'workout' is a noun. Also, 'work it out' is the correct form here.

× See, I've see if I can get it up, get it operated.

✓ See, I try to see if I can get it up and get it operating.

'I've see' is incorrect; it should be 'I try to see'. Also, 'get it operated' is awkward; 'get it operating' is better.

× If I can't, if it can't run very smoothly.

✓ If I can't, or if it can't run very smoothly.

The sentence is incomplete and needs conjunction 'or' to connect the two conditions properly.

× So maybe I will check up the menu instructions.

✓ So maybe I will check the manual instructions.

The phrase 'check up' is incorrect here; 'check' is sufficient. Also, 'menu instructions' should be 'manual instructions'.

× Yes, I do think so. It's kind of important to read the instructions because when you first because the first time that you bought the machine, you don't know how it works.

✓ Yes, I do think so. It's kind of important to read the instructions because when you first buy the machine, you don't know how it works.

The phrase 'when you first because the first time that you bought' is redundant and incorrect. It should be 'when you first buy' to match the present tense context.

× It would be better to use the instruction to guide you step by step in case you don't break it.

✓ It would be better to use the instructions to guide you step by step so you don't break it.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions'. Also, 'in case you don't break it' is awkward; 'so you don't break it' is clearer.