Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议注意句子结构的完整性和逻辑连贯性，避免重复和冗余。可以使用连接词使表达更自然流畅。

예시: My favorite machine at home is the washing machine because it saves me a lot of time. Without it, I would have to wash clothes by hand, which is tiring and time-consuming.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不准确的问题，建议注意主谓一致和词汇的正确使用，同时丰富细节内容，使回答更具体。

예시: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save a lot of time. This allows people to focus on other important tasks, such as working or spending time with family.

제안: 回答中表达不够简洁且有语法错误，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的表达方式。

예시: To be honest, I usually don't read the instructions before using the washing machine because I can learn from my mom. For example, if I want to dry clothes, I just ask her for help.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不准确，建议注意动词形式和句子结构，同时丰富理由，使回答更有说服力。

예시: I think reading instructions is important, but sometimes it's not necessary because the functions are simple. You can also learn from others, like asking your family for help.

× For example, without the I would have to wash clothes by hand, it will hurt my hand and weighs me a lot of time.

✓ For example, without it I would have to wash clothes by hand, it will hurt my hand and waste a lot of my time.

句中缺少代词“it”，导致句子不完整。"weighs me a lot of time"中的"weighs"用错，应为"waste"表示浪费时间。

× Yes, I think washing machine and the sweeping machines are very important.

✓ Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important.

此处应使用复数形式"washing machines"与"sweeping machines"，因为谈论的是一般的机器种类。

× the washing machine and the sweeping machine can saves a lot of time for you and at that time you can do a lot of worthy things such as do your job or do your home.

✓ the washing machine and the sweeping machine can save a lot of time for you and at that time you can do a lot of worthwhile things such as do your job or do your housework.

助动词"can"后动词应为原形，故"saves"应改为"save"。"worthy things"用词不当，应为"worthwhile things"。

× For example, the washing machine and the sweeping machine can saves a lot of time for you and at that time you can do a lot of worthy things such as do your job or do your home.

✓ For example, the washing machine and the sweeping machine can save a lot of time for you, and at that time you can do a lot of worthwhile things such as do your job or do your housework.

"do your home"表达不正确，应为"do your housework"表示做家务。

× I will not read the instruction before I use the washing machine because in my opinion, I think I can learn it from my mom.

✓ I will not read the instructions before I use the washing machine because in my opinion, I think I can learn it from my mom.

"instruction"应使用复数形式"instructions"，表示说明书的内容。

× For example, if I want to use the washing machine, I can ask my mom how to use it such like I want to dry it, I can call my mom.

✓ For example, if I want to use the washing machine, I can ask my mom how to use it. For example, if I want to dry it, I can call my mom.

"such like"用法错误，应分句表达，避免句子过长且结构混乱。

× I think reading the instruction is important, but not very necessary because the function is very simple.

✓ I think reading the instructions is important, but not very necessary because the functions are very simple.

"instruction"应为复数"instructions"，"function"应为复数"functions"，因为通常说明书包含多个功能。

× You can learning from other people, not just from the instruction.

✓ You can learn from other people, not just from the instructions.

情态动词"can"后应接动词原形，故"learning"应改为"learn"。