Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够自然且存在语法错误，且表达不够连贯。建议使用更自然的表达方式，避免断断续续的句子，并且正确使用单词，如'messaging chair'应为'massage chair'。

예시: My favourite machine at home is the massage chair because I enjoy relaxing on it after a long day. It helps me relieve stress and feel refreshed.

제안: 回答内容基本符合要求，但句子结构不够完整，存在语法错误。建议使用连贯的句子，并注意主谓一致。

예시: Yes, definitely. Washing machines and sweeping machines play an important role in my household chores. Without them, my home would be very messy and untidy.

제안: 回答不连贯且语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地表达观点，并使用正确的语法结构。

예시: Well, I usually don't read the instructions because I find it time-consuming. However, I know it's important to understand how the machine works.

제안: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议用完整的句子表达观点，并说明原因。

예시: When I was young, I didn't think it was important to read instructions because I wasn't interested in complicated tasks. But now, I realize it's necessary to avoid mistakes.

× I would say that the messaging chair is.

✓ I would say that the massage chair is.

messaging是动名词，意思是发信息，不符合语境，正确词应为massage，表示按摩。此处是单数名词，需用单数形式。

× because I like to sit on them and enjoy a message.

✓ because I like to sit on it and enjoy a massage.

前文提到的是单数的massage chair，代词应使用单数形式it，且message是信息，massage才是按摩。

× These two machines are involved in my home housework.

✓ These two machines are involved in my housework.

home housework表达重复，通常用housework表示家务劳动。

× And plays an important role.

✓ And play an important role.

主语是复数These two machines，谓语动词应使用复数形式play。

× Without these two machine, I reckon that my home will be a total mess and untidy.

✓ Without these two machines, I reckon that my home will be a total mess and untidy.

machine应为复数machines，与前面的these two呼应。

× Well, not really. Because of the reasons that I. Recommend. Reading instructions is. Time raising and is integrated to. Know how the machine function and therefore I.

✓ Well, not really. Because I recommend reading instructions. It is time-consuming but necessary to know how the machine functions, and therefore I do it.

原句断句不完整，语序混乱，缺少谓语，需调整句子结构使其完整通顺。

× Know how the machine function and therefore I.

✓ Know how the machine functions and therefore I do.

machine是单数，谓语动词function应加s变为functions。

× When I was young. I definitely disagree. About this opinions because.

✓ When I was young, I definitely disagreed about this opinion because.

描述过去的情况，动词应使用过去时disagreed，opinions应为单数opinion与this呼应。

× I'm not a person that. Interested in this type of complex work?

✓ I'm not a person who is interested in this type of complex work.

关系代词that后应有谓语动词is，且句末不应使用问号，改为陈述句。