Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了观点，但语法错误较多，且句子结构不够清晰。建议注意动词时态和主谓一致，避免重复表达，同时使用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: My favourite machine at home is the dishwasher because it makes cleaning up after cooking much easier. After cooking, I often feel tired and frustrated, so the dishwasher helps me save energy and time by washing the dishes automatically.

제안: 回答中表达不够清晰，部分词汇使用不当，句子结构混乱。建议使用更准确的词汇，明确表达观点，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: Definitely, washing machines and vacuum cleaners are essential at home because they reduce our workload. After a busy day, we often don't have enough time or energy to clean manually, so these machines help keep the house clean efficiently.

제안: 回答中有较多口语填充词，表达不够清晰，且句子结构混乱。建议减少口语填充词，使用简洁明了的句子表达观点，并注意语法正确。

예시: It depends on the machine. If it is simple to use, I usually don't read the instructions. However, for complex machines, I prefer to read the manual or look for instructions online to understand how to operate them properly.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够连贯。建议注意句子结构，使用连接词使表达更流畅，同时避免口语填充词。

예시: I think it is important to read the instructions because they help you understand how to use the machine and its functions properly. Otherwise, you might misuse it and cause damage or even harm yourself.

× Well it's probably the dishwasher because it make me very comfortable after I cooked.

✓ Well it's probably the dishwasher because it makes me very comfortable after I cooked.

主语是单数第三人称"it"，谓语动词应加-s，变成"makes"。这是主谓一致的基本规则。

× When I cook after the cook I'm feel very frustrated so I don't have too much energy to wash them.

✓ When I cook or after cooking, I feel very frustrated so I don't have too much energy to wash them.

"I'm feel"是错误的时态和结构，应改为"I feel"。另外，"after the cook"表达不清，应改为"after cooking"或"when I cook"。

× So it gives me much easier to wash them after the dinner.

✓ So it makes it much easier for me to wash them after dinner.

"gives me much easier"结构不正确，应使用"makes it much easier for me"。此外，"after the dinner"中"the"不必要，改为"after dinner"。

× Definitely it's a necessary product in home so it can release your work and help you to do homework and keep your house clean and better.

✓ Definitely it's a necessary product in the home so it can reduce your work and help you do housework and keep your house cleaner and better.

"in home"应为"in the home"，"homework"指学校作业，家务应为"housework"，"release your work"表达不当，应为"reduce your work"。

× After the work you don't have much time to wash them by your hand.

✓ After work, you don't have much time to wash them by hand.

"After the work"应为"After work"，"by your hand"应为"by hand"，这是固定搭配。

× Well, it really depends because if those machines are really umm, simple to understand, what should you do or just uh, pass the press the penalty or something like this, You probably don't use much effort to understand it or even you can find this online.

✓ Well, it really depends because if those machines are really simple to understand, like what you should do or just pressing a button or something like that, you probably don't need to put much effort into understanding it or you can even find instructions online.

句子结构混乱，"pass the press the penalty"无意义，应改为"pressing a button"等表达。句子应更通顺，逻辑清晰。

× So I don't I do not often use it.

✓ So I don't often use it.

"don't I do not"重复，应去掉其中一个，保持句子简洁。

× I suppose so, because you can understand it better how to use it and get to know how many function there have.

✓ I suppose so, because you can better understand how to use it and get to know how many functions it has.

"how many function"应为复数"functions"，"there have"结构错误，应为"it has"。

× So it's really necessary before you use it and it.

✓ So it's really necessary to read the instructions before you use it.

句子结构不完整，"and it"无意义，应补充完整表达。

× If you don't, you might cause some, uh, hurt or get problem with this.

✓ If you don't, you might cause some harm or have problems with it.

"cause some hurt"表达不自然，应为"cause some harm"，"get problem"应为"have problems"，"with this"应为"with it"。