Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在较多的语气词“uh”，影响流畅性。建议减少填充词，使用更自然的表达方式。同时，句子结构较为简单，且“broaden my opinions or minds”表达不够地道，建议使用更准确的词汇。

예시: My favourite machine at home is the TV because I enjoy watching various programs. It helps me relax after a long day and keeps me informed about current events, which broadens my perspective.

제안: 回答中重复使用“uh”，且句子结构不够连贯。建议使用连接词使表达更流畅，并避免重复词汇。内容可以更具体，举例说明机器的重要性。

예시: Yes, washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save us a lot of time and effort. For example, washing machines clean clothes efficiently, and sweeping machines help keep the floor clean without much manual work.

제안: 回答表达不够清晰，“these people”用词错误，应指“instructions”。建议用更准确的词汇，并使句子更连贯。

예시: Yes, I usually read the instructions to understand how to use the machines properly. However, if I am familiar with a machine, I might skip reading and rely on my experience to operate it.

제안: 回答中有重复词“read read”，且“applications”用词不当，应为“machines”。建议注意用词准确，避免重复，并使用更自然的连接词。

예시: Yes, I think reading instructions is important. Firstly, they teach us how to use machines correctly. Secondly, if any problems occur, the instructions can guide us to solve them effectively.

× I think it can help me relaxed and it will, uh, help me broaden my, uh, opinions or minds by watching some news on TV.

✓ I think it can help me relax and it will, uh, help me broaden my, uh, opinions or minds by watching some news on TV.

这里的动词help后面应该接动词原形relax，而不是过去式或过去分词relaxed。动词help后面跟动词原形是固定用法。

× we usually need these machines to help us solve some, uh, basic household tasks such as we can use washing machine to wash some dirty clothes and use using the sweep machines to, uh, remove the dust on the floor.

✓ we usually need these machines to help us solve some, uh, basic household tasks such as we can use washing machines to wash some dirty clothes and use sweeping machines to, uh, remove the dust on the floor.

washing machine和sweep machines的单复数不一致，前面提到的是machines复数，后面也应保持复数形式。sweep machines应改为sweeping machines，表示扫地机。

× use using the sweep machines to, uh, remove the dust on the floor.

✓ use the sweeping machines to, uh, remove the dust on the floor.

这里的use后面不应该跟动名词using，而是直接用名词短语the sweeping machines。

× Yes, these people could help us know how to use these machines better.

✓ Yes, these instructions could help us know how to use these machines better.

这里的these people用错了，应该指代说明书，即these instructions。

× I will try to use it and solve some problems by my experiences.

✓ I will try to use it and solve some problems by my experience.

experience不可数，表示经验时不加复数形式。

× Yes, it is important to read read instructions.

✓ Yes, it is important to read instructions.

重复了单词read，应删除一个。

× these instructions can help us to know how to use these applications correctly.

✓ these instructions can help us know how to use these applications correctly.

help后面一般不加to，直接接动词原形know。