Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议注意句子结构，避免重复和冗余，同时使用更准确的词汇表达。

예시: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it saves me a lot of time and effort, especially in winter when the water is very cold. It protects my hands from getting cold and makes laundry much easier.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议使用连贯的句子结构，注意主谓一致，并且避免重复表达。

예시: I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important in daily life because they save a lot of time and effort. Especially in winter, I prefer to stay warm under my blanket rather than cleaning, so these machines really help protect my hands and make life easier.

제안: 回答表达基本清楚，但存在语法错误，建议注意时态和动词形式的正确使用，同时使句子更流畅。

예시: Usually, I don't read the instructions because I think machines are easy to use. However, once I bought a small washing machine and used it without reading the manual, it broke down. After that, I realized it is important to read instructions carefully.

제안: 回答中有语法和用词错误，建议注意名词复数形式和介词使用，同时使表达更简洁自然。

예시: Yes, I think it's very important to read the instructions carefully because they explain how to use the machine properly and safely. Also, instructions often include information about after-sales service, which helps if the product has any problems.

× But I filled the machine at home is so the washing machine because it saves me a lot of time and effort, especially in winter when the water is very cold.

✓ But I feel the machine at home is the washing machine because it saves me a lot of time and effort, especially in winter when the water is very cold.

这里'so'用错了，应该是'feel'，但主要是单复数问题不明显，改为正确表达。

× It's very convenient and makes doing language more easier.

✓ It's very convenient and makes doing laundry easier.

'more easier'是错误的比较级表达，'easier'已经是比较级，不需要加'more'。另外，'language'应为'laundry'。

× As I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important in my day life because they save me a lot of time and effort on household works.

✓ I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important in my daily life because they save me a lot of time and effort on household work.

'day life'应为'daily life'，'household works'应为'household work'，'work'在这里是不可数名词。

× So this machine is really protect my hands and make life easier.

✓ So this machine really protects my hands and makes life easier.

动词前不需要'is'，应直接用第三人称单数形式'protects'和'makes'。

× Yes, I usually don't read the instructions before because I think the machines are easy to use.

✓ Yes, I usually don't read the instructions before using the machine because I think the machines are easy to use.

'before'后面应接动名词短语，表示在使用机器之前。

× However, once last time I bought a small washing machine and used it without read the manual, it broke down.

✓ However, last time I bought a small washing machine and used it without reading the manual, it broke down.

'without'后面应接动名词'reading'，而不是动词原形。

× Yes, I think it's very important to read the instructions carefully because they explain how to use the machine properly and safety.

✓ Yes, I think it's very important to read the instructions carefully because they explain how to use the machine properly and safely.

'safety'是名词，句中应使用副词'safely'修饰动词'use'。

× Additionally the instructions you should often include informations about after sales service which can ensure if the products have any problem they will have something to do after that.

✓ Additionally, the instructions should often include information about after-sales service, which can ensure that if the products have any problems, they will have support afterwards.

'informations'是不可数名词，应为'information'；'after sales service'应加连字符为'after-sales service'；句子结构也需调整使其更通顺。