Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，导致意思难以理解。建议你简洁明了地表达观点，避免重复和语法错误。例如，可以先明确指出你最喜欢的机器是电脑，然后简要说明原因。

예시: My favourite machine at home is my computer because I can play games and browse the Internet. It helps me relax and stay connected with the world.

제안: 回答中有发音和词汇错误，如“sweeping mushroom”应为“sweeping machine”，且句子结构不完整。建议注意发音准确，使用正确词汇，并且完整表达观点。

예시: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they make cleaning easier and save a lot of time for other activities.

제안: 回答表达不够流畅，语法和用词有误。建议使用简单清晰的句子表达观点，并且注意语法正确。

예시: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because it helps me understand how to use it safely and properly.

제안: 你的回答较为清晰，但有些句子重复且用词单一。建议尝试使用更多连接词和丰富词汇，使表达更自然流畅。

예시: Definitely, reading the instructions is important because it guides you to use the machine correctly and avoid any damage. This ensures the machine lasts longer and works efficiently.

× I think the favorite bathroom is my computer because I can only play computer games, but also search on the Internet on my computer, get on my computer, It's not only allow me to have relax by painting again, also help me to get in touch in the world, but.

✓ I think the favorite machine is my computer because I can not only play computer games, but also search on the Internet on my computer. It's not only allowing me to relax by painting, but also helps me to get in touch with the world.

原句中“favorite bathroom”应为“favorite machine”，且“not only allow me”应改为“not only allowing me”或“not only allows me”，主谓一致错误。句子结构混乱，需拆分并调整动词形式。

× I think washing machine and sweeping mushroom is very important because it's allow me to, uh, wash the clothes in a more convenient way and it only help us save time, but also can allow me to have more time to do something important.

✓ I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they allow me to wash clothes in a more convenient way, and they not only help us save time, but also allow me to have more time to do something important.

“washing machine and sweeping mushroom”应为复数形式“washing machines and sweeping machines”，且“it's allow”应为“they allow”，主谓一致错误。

× Test to say if you don't read the instruction before using a machine you can. You don't know what the ability this machine have and what power this machine need and what how many times should this machine have to recover.

✓ I want to say if you don't read the instructions before using a machine, you won't know what abilities this machine has, what power this machine needs, and how many times this machine needs to recover.

“Test to say”应为“I want to say”，且“instruction”应为复数“instructions”。“what the ability this machine have”应为“what abilities this machine has”，主谓不一致且词序错误。

× Definitely. I think it's very important to read the instruction because the instruction tells you how to use this machine correctly and effectively.

✓ Definitely. I think it's very important to read the instructions because the instructions tell you how to use this machine correctly and effectively.

“instruction”应为复数形式“instructions”，且动词应与复数主语一致，故“tells”改为“tell”。