Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Try to give a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words like 'uh', and provide specific details with correct vocabulary. Also, avoid vague or incorrect phrases such as 'Yoga' (likely you meant 'Yoshi') and 'Japan's favorite, favorable' which is unclear. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: My favourite machine at home is the Nintendo Switch, a popular gaming console. I enjoy playing games like Super Mario and Yoshi's Crafted World on it. It is very popular in Japan and offers a lot of fun and entertainment for me.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. You should directly answer the question and provide clear reasons with specific examples. Avoid confusing phrases like 'wipe the red dishes'. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

예시: I believe washing machines and sweeping machines are important because they save time and effort. For example, a washing machine can clean clothes quickly, which is very helpful for busy people like me.

제안: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and unclear expressions. Use correct verb forms and clearer sentence structures. Also, explain your reasoning with linking words to improve coherence.

예시: I don't often read instructions before using a machine. However, if the machine seems complicated, I usually read the manual to understand how to use it properly. For simple devices like game consoles, I prefer to learn by trying them out.

제안: Your answer is confusing and contains many grammatical errors. You should clearly state your opinion and support it with reasons. Use correct verb tenses and linking words to make your answer logical and easy to understand.

예시: I don't think it is always necessary to read instructions because sometimes we can figure out how to use a machine by understanding its main functions. However, reading instructions can be helpful for complex devices to avoid mistakes.

× In my house, uh, we have Nintendo Switch.

✓ In my house, uh, we have a Nintendo Switch.

The noun 'Nintendo Switch' is a singular countable noun and requires an article 'a' before it to be grammatically correct.

× I enjoyed this game so much.

✓ I enjoy this game so much.

The question is about a current favourite machine, so the present tense 'enjoy' is appropriate rather than the past tense 'enjoyed'.

× Like Super Mario and also like Yoga.

✓ Like Super Mario and also like Yoga.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear; 'Yoga' is likely a mishearing or mispronunciation of 'Yoshi', a game character. However, no grammatical error is identified here based on the provided list.

× This is Japan's favorite, favorable.

✓ This is Japan's favourite.

The word 'favorable' is incorrectly used here; 'favourite' is the correct adjective to express preference.

× I think we don't need it in my life because we can wash dishes by ourselves and also we can't just wipe the red dishes.

✓ I think we don't need it in my life because we can wash dishes by ourselves and also we can just wipe the red dishes.

The modal verb 'can't' is incorrectly used; it should be 'can' to express ability. Also, 'red dishes' is unclear but grammatically acceptable.

× So it's not so hard to for me to do it.

✓ So it's not so hard for me to do it.

The preposition 'to' is unnecessary and incorrect before 'for me'; the correct phrase is 'hard for me to do it'.

× Not often but if the machine looks really hard one like difficult one I lead the instruction but if like small machine like game or easiest one I do not lead just like touch or doing it.

✓ Not often, but if the machine looks really hard, like a difficult one, I read the instructions. But if it's a small machine, like a game or an easy one, I do not read, I just touch or use it.

The verb 'lead' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'read' when referring to instructions. Also, tense consistency and article usage are corrected.

× I don't think we have delayed it's important to lead instruction codes because I I we can think about what the main function of the machine, so we don't need did it.

✓ I don't think it's important to read instruction codes because we can think about the main function of the machine, so we don't need to do it.

The phrase 'have delayed' is incorrect and unnecessary. The verb 'lead' should be 'read'. Also, 'did it' should be 'to do it' to maintain correct infinitive form. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.