Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了主要意思，但句子结构较为简单，且有些表达不够自然。建议使用更地道的表达方式，并避免重复“do”。

예시: My favourite machine at home is my computer because I use it for work, completing homework, and playing games.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，表达不够清晰。建议注意单复数形式，使用正确的词汇，并提供具体且准确的细节。

예시: Yes, I think washing machines and vacuum cleaners are essential in modern homes because they save a lot of time and effort. For example, washing machines clean clothes thoroughly and efficiently.

제안: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够流畅。建议简洁明了地说明原因，并注意句子结构。

예시: Yes, I always read the instructions to understand how to use the machine properly and to fix any problems if they occur.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议使用完整句子，注意时态和主谓一致，明确表达观点。

예시: Yes, I think reading instructions is very important because without them, I might make mistakes and damage the machine.

× Yes, I believe washing machine and sweeping machine are very important in modern household.

✓ Yes, I believe washing machines and sweeping machines are very important in modern households.

这里“washing machine”和“sweeping machine”应使用复数形式，因为指的是一般的多台机器；“modern household”应为复数“modern households”，表示现代家庭的普遍情况。

× They save a significant account time and their efforts compared to doing laundries or clean minority.

✓ They save a significant amount of time and effort compared to doing laundry or cleaning manually.

“a significant account time”应为“a significant amount of time”，表示大量时间；“their efforts”应为“effort”，不可数名词；“doing laundries”应为“doing laundry”，laundry是不可数名词；“clean minority”应为“cleaning manually”，原句用词错误。

× For example, washing machine ensure clothes are clean, salty and hydra.

✓ For example, washing machines ensure clothes are clean, salty and hydrated.

主语“washing machine”应为复数“washing machines”以匹配动词“ensure”；“salty and hydra”用词错误，应为“salty and hydrated”，但“salty”不合适，可能想表达“clean and hydrated”。

× Yes, I always read the instruction because I use it because I should know how to use this machine and to solve some problem when we get the wrong with the wrong step on it.

✓ Yes, I always read the instructions because I should know how to use this machine and solve some problems when we make mistakes with the steps.

“instruction”应为复数“instructions”，表示说明书；“some problem”应为复数“some problems”；“get the wrong with the wrong step”表达不正确，改为“make mistakes with the steps”。

× Yes, I think read instruction is very important because if I don't read the instruction I might miss some I'm might makes mistakes and maybe damage this machine.

✓ Yes, I think reading instructions is very important because if I don't read the instructions, I might miss some details, make mistakes, and maybe damage this machine.

“read instruction”应为动名词形式“reading instructions”；“instruction”应为复数“instructions”；“miss some I'm might makes mistakes”语法混乱，改为“miss some details, make mistakes”。