Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
What is your favourite machine in your home?
수험생
Well, I really like and enjoy cleaning my house and the machine that I enjoy that we it's a recent expense that we had. It's a vacuum cleaner that has like an LED light that helps you collect to see the dust that you're collecting. And it's very interesting because it it's very fun to.
시험관
Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?
수험생
Absolutely yes. Especially in in our daily life when we are very busy and don't have much time to spend on doing chores or laundry. I think that those machines are lifesaver. They make our lives easier and they help us gain a bit more time to spend on things that are much more important that house chores.
시험관
Do you read the instructions before using a machine?
수험생
Well, nowadays I do, because the machines that are being produced are much more advanced and kind of harder for you to get the hold of. So yes, I do need to take a look at the instruction sheets, but mostly I get the hang of it very quickly and pretty easily and I just get to start using them right away.
시험관
Do you think it is important to read the instructions?
수험생
Yes, absolutely. I mean, instruction, instructions are there for a reason. They help you understand the machine better. And umm, I think that by reading the instructions you can avoid kind of messing with the machines because sometimes we don't know how to use it and we just try to do it our own way and sometimes we end up just ruining the machines. So yes, it is important.
평가
총점
Part 1
What is your favourite machine in your home?
점수: 70.0제안: Përmirësoni strukturën e përgjigjes duke përdorur fjalë lidhëse për të bërë përgjigjen më të rrjedhshme dhe shmangni përsëritjet. Përpiquni të jeni më të qartë dhe të përdorni fjalë më të sakta për të përshkruar pajisjen.
예시: My favourite machine at home is our new vacuum cleaner. It has an LED light that helps me see the dust clearly, which makes cleaning more effective. I find it very interesting and even fun to use because it helps keep my house spotless.
Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?
점수: 85.0제안: Përpiquni të përdorni lidhëza për të lidhur idetë dhe të jepni shembuj më specifikë për të mbështetur mendimin tuaj. Gjithashtu, shmangni përsëritjet dhe përdorni fjalë më të ndryshme për të shprehur të njëjtën ide.
예시: Yes, washing machines and sweeping machines are very important, especially because we often have busy schedules. For example, using these machines saves a lot of time that we can spend on work or family. Therefore, they are real lifesavers in managing daily chores efficiently.
Do you read the instructions before using a machine?
점수: 80.0제안: Përmirësoni rrjedhshmërinë duke përdorur lidhëza dhe shmangni fjalitë shumë të gjata. Jepni më shumë detaje specifike për mënyrën se si lexoni udhëzimet.
예시: Nowadays, I usually read the instructions before using a machine because they are more advanced. For instance, I carefully check the manual to understand the functions, but I often learn quickly and start using the machine without problems.
Do you think it is important to read the instructions?
점수: 75.0제안: Përpiquni të përdorni fjalë më të sakta dhe të shmangni përsëritjet. Përdorni lidhëza për të bërë përgjigjen më të rrjedhshme dhe jepni një shembull konkret për të mbështetur mendimin tuaj.
예시: Yes, reading instructions is very important because they help you understand how to use a machine properly. For example, once I ignored the manual and accidentally damaged a device. Since then, I always read the instructions carefully to avoid such problems.
문법
× I think that those machines are lifesaver.
✓ I think that those machines are lifesavers.
The word 'lifesaver' should be plural 'lifesavers' to agree with the plural subject 'machines'. When referring to multiple items, the noun must be in plural form.
× I think that those machines are lifesaver.
✓ I think that those machines are lifesavers.
No preposition error here, correction is for singular/plural issue only.
× the machine that I enjoy that we it's a recent expense that we had.
✓ the machine that I enjoy is a recent expense that we had.
The phrase 'that we it's' is incorrect and confusing. It should be simplified to 'is' to correctly link the subject and predicate.
× it's very fun to.
✓ it's very fun too.
The word 'to' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'too' meaning 'also'.
× helps you collect to see the dust that you're collecting.
✓ helps you see the dust that you're collecting.
The phrase 'collect to see' is incorrect; 'helps you see' is the correct expression to indicate assistance in seeing dust.
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