Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but to improve, try to use more varied vocabulary and add linking words to enhance coherence. Also, avoid repeating similar ideas like 'saves time and effort' twice; instead, elaborate with different aspects or benefits.

예시: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it efficiently cleans clothes, saving me valuable time. Moreover, it allows me to multitask, such as preparing meals or relaxing, while the machine operates. For instance, after a tiring day, I simply load the clothes and let the machine do the work, which is very convenient.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but contains some language errors and lacks clarity. For improvement, correct vocabulary mistakes (e.g., 'swiping' should be 'sweeping'), use linking words to connect ideas, and provide a more specific example with complete sentences.

예시: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are essential in today's homes because they reduce manual labour and save time. Furthermore, busy individuals benefit greatly from these appliances. For example, a washing machine thoroughly cleans clothes without much effort from the user.

제안: Your answer is relevant but has grammatical errors and incomplete sentences. To improve, focus on sentence structure, use proper articles ('a new machine'), and complete your examples fully. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I usually read the instructions before using a machine, especially if it is new to me. This practice helps me operate the device safely and avoid mistakes. For instance, when I bought a new coffee maker, I carefully read the manual to ensure I use it correctly.

제안: Your answer is on point but contains grammatical errors and incomplete sentences. To improve, correct grammar mistakes ('assembling furniture'), use linking words, and provide a complete example to illustrate your point clearly.

예시: Yes, I think reading instructions is very important because they guide us to use products correctly and safely. For example, when assembling furniture or operating electronic devices, following the instructions helps avoid errors and accidents.

× Yes, I believe washing machines and swiping machines are very important in modern households.

✓ Yes, I believe washing machines and sweeping machines are very important in modern households.

The word 'swiping' is incorrect here; the correct plural noun is 'sweeping machines'. This is a spelling error affecting the noun form, which should be plural and correctly spelled to convey the intended meaning.

× They save a lot of time and efforts compared to doing laundry or cleaning manually, which is especially helpful for busy people.

✓ They save a lot of time and effort compared to doing laundry or cleaning manually, which is especially helpful for busy people.

The word 'efforts' should be singular 'effort' because 'a lot of' is usually followed by an uncountable noun in this context. 'Effort' here is uncountable, so the plural form is incorrect.

× For example, using a washing machine, ensure clothes are cleaned throughout.

✓ For example, using a washing machine ensures clothes are cleaned thoroughly.

The original sentence lacks a clear subject and verb agreement. 'Using a washing machine' is a gerund phrase that should be the subject, so the verb should be 'ensures' (third person singular). Also, 'throughout' is incorrect; the correct adverb is 'thoroughly' to describe the cleaning process.

× Yes, I usually read the instructions before using a machine, especially if it is a new to me.

✓ Yes, I usually read the instructions before using a machine, especially if it is new to me.

The phrase 'a new to me' is incorrect because 'new' is an adjective and does not need the article 'a' here. The correct phrase is 'new to me' without 'a'.

× For example, when I bought a new coffee maker, read the manual, ensure I use.

✓ For example, when I bought a new coffee maker, I read the manual to ensure I use it correctly.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks subjects and proper verb forms. Adding 'I' as the subject before 'read' and completing the sentence with 'to ensure I use it correctly' makes it grammatically correct and clear.

× For example, when assemble assembling a furniture or using electronic devices following the instruction.

✓ For example, when assembling furniture or using electronic devices, following the instructions is important.

The phrase 'when assemble assembling a furniture' is incorrect; 'assembling furniture' is correct without 'a' because 'furniture' is uncountable. Also, 'instruction' should be plural 'instructions' as it refers to multiple steps or guidelines. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correctness.