Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có nội dung rõ ràng, tuy nhiên cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như "a vacuum" thay vì "vacuum cleaner" và sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn.

예시: My favorite machine at home is definitely the vacuum cleaner. Since I am a fashion designer and cut a lot of fabric every day, there is always dust and fabric pieces around. Therefore, using the vacuum helps me keep my house clean and tidy.

제안: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt để câu trả lời rõ ràng và chính xác hơn. Tránh lỗi như "I would like to washing dishes" và sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc. Ngoài ra, nên trình bày ý kiến rõ ràng hơn và tránh mâu thuẫn trong câu.

예시: In my opinion, washing machines and sweeping machines are not very important to me. I prefer washing dishes by hand and cleaning my house myself using a vacuum cleaner because I enjoy doing these tasks personally.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tốt nhưng cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để rõ ràng hơn. Ví dụ, "coughing machine" có thể là lỗi đánh máy hoặc từ không chính xác. Bạn nên dùng từ chính xác và câu văn mạch lạc hơn.

예시: I always read the instructions carefully before using a machine for the first time. This helps me avoid confusion and ensures I use the machine correctly. For example, when I used a coffee machine, reading the manual was very helpful.

제안: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời tự nhiên và chính xác hơn. Tránh lỗi như "to using machine" và sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: Yes, I think it is very important to read the instructions before using a machine for the first time. Reading carefully helps me avoid confusion and makes it easier to operate the machine correctly.

× My favorite machine definitely is vacuum cleaner.

✓ My favorite machine definitely is the vacuum cleaner.

The noun 'vacuum cleaner' is a singular countable noun and requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific item. Omitting 'the' before singular countable nouns is incorrect.

× there are a lot of dust and pieces of fabric in my house

✓ there is a lot of dust and pieces of fabric in my house

'Dust' is an uncountable noun and should be used with singular verb 'is'. 'Pieces of fabric' is plural, but since 'a lot of' refers collectively, the verb agrees with the first noun 'dust' which is uncountable and singular.

× my hair usually fall out.

✓ my hair usually falls out.

The subject 'hair' is treated as singular when referring to hair collectively, so the verb should be 'falls' to agree in number.

× Using a vacuum helped me a lot to clean and keep my house not messy.

✓ Using a vacuum helps me a lot to clean and keep my house from being messy.

The verb 'helped' should be in present tense 'helps' to match the habitual action. Also, 'keep my house not messy' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'keep my house from being messy'.

× I would like to washing dishes by my hand and cleaning my house by myself using a vacuum.

✓ I would like to wash dishes by hand and clean my house by myself using a vacuum.

After 'would like to', the base form of the verb should be used, not the '-ing' form. Also, 'by my hand' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'by hand'.

× I love to do that and not usually do not you modern machine.

✓ I love to do that and usually do not use modern machines.

The sentence has incorrect pronoun usage and word order. 'Not usually do not you modern machine' is incorrect. The corrected sentence uses proper subject-verb order and pronouns.

× I definitely always read the instructions before using a machine for the first time.

✓ I always definitely read the instructions before using a machine for the first time.

Adverbs of frequency like 'always' usually come before 'definitely'. The order of adverbs affects the naturalness of the sentence.

× I always read carefully and step by step by using this machine that may help me or not to get confused and use it in the right way.

✓ I always read the instructions carefully and step by step when using this machine; this helps me avoid confusion and use it in the right way.

The original sentence is awkward and unclear. Reordering and clarifying the sentence improves readability and meaning.

× For example like coughing machine.

✓ For example, a coughing machine.

The phrase 'For example like' is redundant; 'For example' alone is sufficient. Also, 'coughing machine' is unclear; assuming it refers to a 'cough machine' or 'nebulizer', but correction focuses on preposition use.

× As I say, reading carefully helped me a lot to not confuse or struggle to using machine and you might think easy to use it after you reading carefully the instruction.

✓ As I said, reading carefully helped me a lot to avoid confusion or struggle when using the machine, and you might think it is easy to use after reading the instructions carefully.

Incorrect pronoun use and verb forms make the sentence unclear. Correcting pronouns and verb forms improves clarity and grammatical correctness.