Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中有一些词汇使用不准确，比如“dimension”应为“appliance”，以及“Dustin and problems”应为“dust and allergens”。建议你注意词汇的准确性，并且句子结构可以更清晰自然。

예시: My favorite appliance at home is the air conditioner because my husband and daughter are allergic to dust and allergens. The air conditioner helps purify the air, which protects my family's health.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，比如“sleeping machines”应为“sweeping machines”，句子结构混乱。建议你注意语法和句子连贯性，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: Yes, I think both washing machines and sweeping machines are very important for families. Washing machines help us clean dirty clothes quickly, saving time. Meanwhile, sweeping machines keep our floors clean, which makes our home more comfortable.

제안: 回答中表达有些重复且不够简洁，建议你直接回答问题，并用连接词使句子更连贯，同时避免重复。

예시: It depends. If I am using a machine for the first time, I always read the instructions carefully. However, if I have used the machine many times before, I usually do not read the instructions again.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清的问题，建议你注意句子结构和时态的正确使用，并且使表达更自然流畅。

예시: Yes, I think it is very important to read the instructions when using a new machine. This helps you understand how to operate it properly, such as which buttons to press to turn it on or off, and which parts to be careful with.

× My favorite dimension is air conditioner at home because my husband and my daughter are allergic to Dustin and problems.

✓ My favorite device is the air conditioner at home because my husband and my daughter are allergic to dust and pollen.

这里“dimension”应为“device”（设备），且“air conditioner”前应加定冠词“the”。“Dustin and problems”应为“dust and pollen”（灰尘和花粉），表示复数名词。

× The Air Clean cleaner can purify the air to protect my family.

✓ The air cleaner can purify the air to protect my family.

“Air Clean cleaner”应为“air cleaner”，形容词顺序和大小写错误。

× Yes, I think both of them are very important for families because washing machines help us to clean The Dirty clothes, then we can save time in the sleeping machines can keep our floor dirty.

✓ Yes, I think both of them are very important for families because washing machines help us to clean the dirty clothes, then we can save time. The sweeping machines can keep our floor clean.

“The Dirty clothes”中“Dirty”不应大写，且“sleeping machines”应为“sweeping machines”，且“keep our floor dirty”应为“keep our floor clean”。

× These two machines really helpful to ours in many ways.

✓ These two machines are really helpful to us in many ways.

缺少系动词“are”，且“ours”应为宾格“us”。

× This is a mixed question.

✓ This is a mixed answer.

上下文中应表达“这是一个复杂的问题”，但学生想表达“这是一个复杂的回答”，原句不符合语境。

× First of all, if I don't know what's this machine, this is the first time I use it, I will read the instruction carefully.

✓ First of all, if I don't know what this machine is and this is the first time I use it, I will read the instructions carefully.

“what's this machine”语序错误，应为“what this machine is”。“instruction”应为复数“instructions”。

× But on the other side, if this machine I used it many times, I know how to use it, then I will not read the instructions.

✓ But on the other hand, if I have used this machine many times and I know how to use it, then I will not read the instructions.

“on the other side”应为“on the other hand”。“if this machine I used it many times”语序错误，应调整为“if I have used this machine many times”。

× Yes, I think it's very important to read the instructions.

✓ Yes, I think it's very important to read the instructions.

该句语法正确，无需修改。

× For example, during the year using a new machine you don't know how to use it, then you need to learn it from the instruction and you will know which button used to turn on and off and which part you need be curious about.

✓ For example, when using a new machine you don't know how to use, you need to learn from the instructions, and you will know which button is used to turn it on and off and which parts you need to be careful about.

“during the year using”应为“when using”。“learn it from the instruction”应为“learn from the instructions”。“which button used to turn on and off”应为“which button is used to turn it on and off”。“which part you need be curious about”应为“which parts you need to be careful about”。