Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“he help me”应为“it helps me”，且句子结构不够清晰。建议使用更准确的主谓一致和简洁的表达，同时避免重复。

예시: My favorite machine at home is a robot vacuum cleaner. It helps me clean the floors in the dining room and bathroom, which saves me a lot of time and effort.

제안: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免重复，并补充具体细节说明机器的重要性。

예시: Yes, I think washing machines and vacuum cleaners are very important because they save time and make household chores much easier.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够流畅。建议使用更准确的句子结构，清晰表达阅读说明书的重要性，并举例说明可能的危险。

예시: Yes, I always read the instructions carefully before using a machine because improper use can be dangerous and cause accidents.

제안: 回答中存在语法和表达混乱的问题，且重复使用“dangerous”。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免重复，并说明阅读说明书的具体好处。

예시: Yes, it is very important to read the instructions because machines can be dangerous if used incorrectly, so reading the manual helps prevent accidents.

× he help me do the housework such as clean the floor in the dining room and the bathroom.

✓ he helps me do the housework such as cleaning the floor in the dining room and the bathroom.

动词help在第三人称单数时应加-s，且clean在此处应使用动名词形式表示动作。

× he help me do the housework such as clean the floor in the dining room and the bathroom.

✓ it helps me do the housework such as cleaning the floor in the dining room and the bathroom.

指代机器时应使用it，而非he。

× It is really.

✓ It is really convenient.

句子不完整，缺少谓语和补充说明，需补全句子使其完整。

× Yes, I believe because since I have them I don't have to clean clean floor and use the machine washing machine, I can not have to have to wash clothes by hand.

✓ Yes, I believe so because since I have them, I don't have to clean the floor or wash clothes by hand using the washing machine.

句子结构混乱，重复用词，缺少连词，需调整语序和用词使句子通顺。

× They can help me save a lot of.

✓ They can help me save a lot of time and effort.

短语不完整，缺少名词，需补充完整表达。

× I'd like to read the details, especially how to use them and the details, because when we use these machines the details is very important.

✓ I'd like to read the instructions, especially how to use them, because when we use these machines, the instructions are very important.

details用词不当，应使用instructions；主谓不一致，details复数，谓语应为are。

× the details is very important.

✓ the details are very important.

details为复数名词，谓语动词应使用复数形式are。

× If you forget of them, then you can use the maybe bring some dangerous I think.

✓ If you forget them, then using them may bring some danger, I think.

forget后不加介词of；句子结构混乱，需调整语序和用词使表达清晰。

× Yes, it is very nice, very necessary to read the instructions because the these machines also, even though can help us to do some housework, they still have some dangerous, uh, dangerous, uh, inspect.

✓ Yes, it is very necessary to read the instructions because these machines, even though they can help us do some housework, still have some dangers.

nice用词不当；句子结构混乱，重复词语，dangerous应改为名词dangers。

× So we should to read the instructor to avoid.

✓ So we should read the instructions to avoid accidents.

should后不加to；instructor用词错误，应为instructions；句子不完整，需补充完整表达。