Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Apni answer e kichu grammar error ache, ar kichu sentence structure aro natural korte paren. Apnar answer e repetition ache, jemon "I think" bar bar use kora hoyeche. Apni linking words use kore answer ke aro coherent korte paren. Apnar vocabulary aro boro korte hobe, jate answer ta beshi professional lage.

예시: My favourite machine at home is my laptop because I use it for studying and gaming. Moreover, it helps me stay connected with my friends and access information quickly. Therefore, I spend most of my time using it, which makes it my favourite machine.

제안: Apnar answer e kichu grammar mistake ache, ar kichu sentence structure aro clear korte hobe. Apni linking words use korte paren jate answer ta logical hoy. Apnar vocabulary aro boro korte hobe, ar answer e specific example dite paren. Apni 'dishes' er jaygay 'washing dishes' er poriborte 'washing clothes' er kotha boltechen, eita clear korte hobe.

예시: Although I don't have washing or sweeping machines at home, I believe they are important. For example, my mother finds physical work difficult, so having these machines would help her wash clothes and clean the house more easily. Therefore, such machines can improve daily life, especially for those who need assistance.

제안: Apnar answer e grammar error ache, ar kichu sentence structure aro natural korte hobe. Apni filler words (like 'uh') komate paren. Apni linking words use kore answer ke aro coherent korte paren. Vocabulary aro boro korte hobe, ar specific example dite paren.

예시: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because it helps me understand how each part works. This knowledge is useful for maintaining the machine properly and avoiding damage. Therefore, reading instructions ensures safety and prolongs the machine's life.

제안: Apnar answer e grammar error onek ache, jemon 'did' er jaygay 'read' hobe, 'prevent' er sathe 's' lagbe. Apni sentence complete korte hobe, ar filler words ba incomplete sentence avoid korte hobe. Apni linking words use kore answer ke logical korte paren. Vocabulary aro boro korte hobe.

예시: Yes, I believe it is very important to read the instructions because it prevents future accidents and helps with proper maintenance. By understanding how to use a machine correctly, we can avoid damage and ensure safety. Therefore, reading instructions is essential before operating any machine.

× I use all of my time using the laptop.

✓ I use all of my time on the laptop.

The phrase 'use all of my time using the laptop' is awkward. The correct preposition is 'on' when referring to spending time with something. So, 'use all of my time on the laptop' is better English usage.

× I use it for study purpose and I also do gaming on my laptop so I think it's my favorite machine.

✓ I use it for study purposes and I also play games on my laptop, so I think it's my favorite machine.

The phrase 'study purpose' should be pluralized to 'study purposes' to indicate various reasons. Also, 'do gaming' is unnatural; the correct expression is 'play games.' This improves clarity and correctness.

× In my household I don't have either of these, but I think it's important if you are rich enough to buy it and afford to, to maintain it.

✓ In my household, I don't have either of these, but I think they're important if you are rich enough to buy them and afford to maintain them.

The pronouns 'it' and 'to maintain it' refer to plural items 'washing machines and sweeping machines,' so they should be plural: 'them' and 'maintain them.' This corrects the singular/plural mismatch.

× Because my mother is not very capable of doing physical work, I think it will help her to do dishes and wash clothes.

✓ Because my mother is not very capable of doing physical work, I think it will help her do the dishes and wash clothes.

The phrase 'help her to do dishes' is better expressed as 'help her do the dishes.' Also, 'do dishes' usually requires the definite article 'the' to specify the task.

× Yes, I do read the instruction because it's very important to know that every parts of the machine for the future benefit.

✓ Yes, I do read the instructions because it's very important to know every part of the machine for future benefit.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions' because machines usually come with multiple instructions. Also, 'every parts' is incorrect; 'every' is followed by singular noun 'part.' The phrase 'for the future benefit' is better as 'for future benefit'.

× And if you do read the instruction, then it will help us for, uh, maintaining that, uh, machine.

✓ And if you do read the instructions, then it will help us maintain that machine.

Again, 'instruction' should be plural 'instructions.' Also, 'help us for maintaining' is incorrect; the verb 'help' is followed by the base form 'maintain' without 'for.' Removing filler words improves clarity.

× So I think it's very important to read instruction before using a machine.

✓ So I think it's very important to read instructions before using a machine.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions' because it refers to multiple guidelines or steps.

× Yes, I think it's very important to did the instruction because it prevent the feature accidents and it also help us with future maintenance.

✓ Yes, I think it's very important to read the instructions because it prevents future accidents and it also helps us with future maintenance.

The verb 'did' is incorrect here; the infinitive 'to read' is needed. Also, 'prevent' and 'help' need to be in third person singular form 'prevents' and 'helps' to agree with singular subject 'it.' 'Feature accidents' is a mistake; it should be 'future accidents.'

× So I think it's important to read the instruction and if.

✓ So I think it's important to read the instructions.

The sentence is incomplete and 'instruction' should be plural 'instructions.' The sentence ends abruptly and should be completed or ended properly.