Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答较为自然且内容相关，但句子结构稍显复杂且有语法错误，如“cannot only”应为“can not only”。建议简化句子结构，注意语法准确性，并适当使用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: My favourite machine at home is the air conditioner. It is very useful because Taiwan has hot summers and cold winters. The air conditioner can cool the room in summer and warm it in winter, which makes us feel comfortable all year round.

제안: 回答直接且有例子支持，但表达不够自然，且“clean the shirt 1 by 1”表达不准确。建议使用更地道的表达方式，并增加连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: I believe washing machines are more important than sweeping machines. This is because washing clothes by hand one by one is very time-consuming and tiring. Therefore, washing machines save a lot of effort and time.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整，如“let it started”应为“let it start”，且最后一句不完整。建议注意语法正确性，完整表达观点，并使用连接词使回答更连贯。

예시: No, I rarely read the instructions before using a machine. For example, with the washing machine, I usually just press the button and start it. However, if something goes wrong, I will read the instructions to fix the problem.

제안: 回答表达不清晰，存在语法错误和拼写错误，如“most of her”应为“most of the time”。建议提高表达的准确性和逻辑性，避免拼写错误，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: I don't think it is very important to read instructions. Sometimes, I enjoy figuring out how to use a machine by myself without any guidance. However, most of the time, I do read the instructions to avoid mistakes.

× From my viewpoint, I think washing machine is more important than sweeping machine.

✓ From my viewpoint, I think washing machines are more important than sweeping machines.

这里涉及单复数问题。washing machine和sweeping machine应使用复数形式，因为指的是一般的洗衣机和扫地机，而不是特指一台机器。

× For example, without washing machine we have to clean the shirt 1 by 1, which is totally a large number for me to handle.

✓ For example, without a washing machine we have to clean the shirts one by one, which is totally a large number for me to handle.

这里“washing machine”前缺少冠词“a”，且“shirt”应为复数“shirts”，因为通常指多件衣服。

× No, I seldom read the instruction before using.

✓ No, I seldom read the instructions before using.

instruction通常用复数形式“instructions”，表示说明书，且前面不加定冠词。

× I just push the button and let it started.

✓ I just push the button and let it start.

这里“let”后应接动词原形，不能用过去式“started”。

× However, I only wash the instruction when it is out of control.

✓ However, I only read the instructions when it is out of control.

“wash the instruction”不合适，应为“read the instructions”，且instruction用复数形式。

× Sometimes I use it but most of her I don't do.

✓ Sometimes I use it but most of the time I don't.

“most of her”是错误表达，应为“most of the time”，表示大多数时间。