Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答较为自然且内容相关，但表达略显口语化且有些重复。建议避免使用“lazy person”这种自我评价，改用更正式的表达，同时增加具体细节使回答更丰富。

예시: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it significantly reduces the time and effort needed to clean clothes. For instance, it allows me to multitask while the machine is running, which improves my daily efficiency.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整，逻辑不够清晰。建议注意句子结构，避免重复，且回答应完整表达观点。

예시: Yes, I believe washing machines and sweeping machines are essential because they save time and reduce physical effort. This allows me to focus on other important tasks, making daily chores more manageable.

제안: 回答内容完整且逻辑清晰，但可以通过使用更多连接词使表达更流畅，同时丰富词汇。

예시: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because many modern devices have multiple functions. By doing so, I can operate them correctly and avoid potential damage, which is important since these machines are often costly.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整，且口语化较强。建议避免使用口语填充词，注意语法准确性，并完整表达观点。

예시: Yes, I think it is very important to read the instructions. For example, when I bought a new coffee maker, reading the manual helped me understand its features and avoid mistakes. Additionally, following the guidelines protects the machine from damage.

× Of course it's important they can because they can save me a lot of time and effort to do the other things instead of washing clothes and sweep the floor by hand which can be tiring and time consuming.

✓ Of course it's important because they can save me a lot of time and effort to do other things instead of washing clothes and sweeping the floor by hand, which can be tiring and time-consuming.

句子中“they can”位置不当，导致句子结构混乱，应去掉多余的“they can”，并且“sweep”应改为动名词“sweeping”，因为前面是介词“instead of”，后面应接动名词。

× Of course it's important they can because they can save me a lot of time and effort to do the other things instead of washing clothes and sweep the floor by hand which can be tiring and time consuming.

✓ Of course it's important because they can save me a lot of time and effort to do other things instead of washing clothes and sweeping the floor by hand, which can be tiring and time-consuming.

介词短语“instead of”后面应接动名词形式，故“sweep”应改为“sweeping”。

× I just love the machine and let it to do all the work.

✓ I just love the machine and let it do all the work.

动词“let”后面直接接动词原形，不加“to”，所以“let it to do”应改为“let it do”。

× As someone who pre.

✓ As someone who prefers convenience, I really appreciate these machines.

句子不完整，缺少谓语和宾语，导致表达不清，应补充完整句子。

× For example, when I bought a new coffee maker, reading the menu help me understand all its features and avoid common mistakes.

✓ For example, when I bought a new coffee maker, reading the manual helps me understand all its features and avoid common mistakes.

“menu”指菜单，不适用于说明书，应改为“manual”；动词“help”主语是单数“reading”，应用第三人称单数形式“helps”。

× For example, when I bought a new coffee maker, reading the menu help me understand all its features and avoid common mistakes.

✓ For example, when I bought a new coffee maker, reading the manual helps me understand all its features and avoid common mistakes.

主语“reading”是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加-s，故“help”应改为“helps”。

× Moreover, since machines can be quite expensive, following the guidelines.

✓ Moreover, since machines can be quite expensive, following the guidelines is important.

句子缺少谓语，导致不完整，应补充谓语使句子完整。