Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时语言不够自然，有重复和口语填充词（如"you know"），且句子结构不完整。建议减少口语填充词，使用完整句子表达观点，并增加具体细节使回答更丰富。

예시: My favourite machine at home is the air fryer because it helps me cook meals quickly and easily. Since I'm not very skilled at cooking, this appliance allows me to prepare delicious and healthy food without much effort.

제안: 回答不完整，句子中断且缺少连贯性。建议回答时注意完整表达观点，使用连接词使内容连贯，并补充具体细节。

예시: Yes, I believe washing machines and sweeping machines are essential, especially for large families like mine. Since we have five members, the washing machine saves us a lot of time by handling large amounts of laundry efficiently. Similarly, the sweeping machine helps keep our home clean with minimal effort.

제안: 回答较好，但句子较长且缺少适当的连接词，表达略显重复。建议使用连接词分句，使表达更清晰自然。

예시: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a new machine. This helps me use it correctly, preventing damage to the machine or wasting food and clothing.

제안: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，缺少连贯性。建议注意语法正确，完整表达观点，并使用连接词使内容连贯。

예시: Yes, I think it is very important to read the instructions before using any new machine. Instructions provide safety guidelines that help prevent accidents and ensure the machine is used properly.

× For example, my family, there are five people in my family, so every day we have a lot of laundry to wash, so the washing machine really helps us a lot Similarly, the.

✓ For example, my family has five people, so every day we have a lot of laundry to wash, so the washing machine really helps us a lot. Similarly, the.

句子中“my family, there are five people in my family”结构不正确，应该用单数动词“has”来表示“家庭有五个人”，因为family作为整体是单数。建议改为“my family has five people”。另外，句子末尾缺少句号，需补充。

× For example, my family, there are five people in my family, so every day we have a lot of laundry to wash, so the washing machine really helps us a lot Similarly, the.

✓ For example, my family has five people, so every day we have a lot of laundry to wash, so the washing machine really helps us a lot. Similarly, the.

句子中“so the washing machine really helps us a lot Similarly, the.”连接不当，缺少句号或分号，导致句子结构混乱。应在“a lot”后加句号，分开两个句子。

× Actually I think we must read the instructions before we using any new machines because instructions provide safety rules that we must follow.

✓ Actually I think we must read the instructions before we use any new machines because instructions provide safety rules that we must follow.

“before we using”中“using”形式错误，应该用动词原形“use”，因为“before”后面接动词时用原形。

× Actually I think we must read the instructions before we using any new machines because instructions provide safety rules that we must follow.

✓ Actually I think we must read the instructions before we use any new machines because instructions provide safety rules that we must follow.

“machines”复数形式正确，但前面动词形式错误，需改为“use”。

× I just, you know, put them in then they are.

✓ I just, you know, put them in, and then they are done.

句子结构不完整，“then they are”缺少谓语，导致句意不明。应补充谓语“done”使句子完整。