Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中表达的意思不够清晰，句子结构较为混乱，且存在语法错误。建议简化句子结构，明确表达洗碗机如何帮助节省时间和缓解家庭矛盾，同时避免重复和冗余。

예시: My favorite machine at home is the dishwasher because it saves me time from washing dishes. This allows me to relax and spend more quality time with my family, which helps reduce conflicts.

제안: 回答中存在重复词汇和语法错误，表达不够连贯。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，明确说明洗衣机和扫地机如何帮助节省时间并促进家庭和谐。

예시: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they help us finish housework quickly. As a result, we have more time for ourselves and can maintain better relationships with our family members.

제안: 回答中有较多口头语“uh”，影响流畅度。建议减少口头语，简洁明了地表达阅读说明书的重要性和原因。

예시: Yes, I always read the instructions carefully when I buy a new machine to ensure I use it correctly and avoid any mistakes.

제안: 回答不完整，句子结构不够清晰，且存在语法错误。建议完整表达说明书的重要性，包括介绍、细节和安全警告，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: Yes, reading the instructions is important because they provide an overview of the machine, explain how to use it properly, and include important safety warnings.

× My favorite machine is dishwasher because it can help me to release my hand to enjoy the life or spare more time on the families and besides it also can resolve the conflict.

✓ My favorite machine is the dishwasher because it can help me free my hands to enjoy life or spend more time with my family, and besides, it can also resolve conflicts.

这里“release my hand”用法不正确，应该用“free my hands”表示“解放我的双手”。“enjoy the life”中“the”不必要，应该是“enjoy life”。“spare more time on the families”中“on”用法错误，应该用“with my family”。此外，缺少冠词“the”在“dishwasher”前。建议注意动词搭配和介词的正确使用。

× My favorite machine is dishwasher because it can help me to release my hand to enjoy the life or spare more time on the families and besides it also can resolve the conflict.

✓ My favorite machine is the dishwasher because it can help me free my hands to enjoy life or spend more time with my family, and besides, it can also resolve conflicts.

“dishwasher”前缺少定冠词“the”，因为这里指的是特定的家用电器。英语中单数可数名词前通常需要冠词。

× My favorite machine is dishwasher because it can help me to release my hand to enjoy the life or spare more time on the families and besides it also can resolve the conflict.

✓ My favorite machine is the dishwasher because it can help me free my hands to enjoy life or spend more time with my family, and besides, it can also resolve conflicts.

“my hand”应为复数“my hands”，因为通常双手一起被解放。

× My favorite machine is dishwasher because it can help me to release my hand to enjoy the life or spare more time on the families and besides it also can resolve the conflict.

✓ My favorite machine is the dishwasher because it can help me free my hands to enjoy life or spend more time with my family, and besides, it can also resolve conflicts.

“spare more time on the families”中“on”用法错误，正确应为“spend more time with my family”，表示“花更多时间和家人在一起”。

× Exactly because both of them can help us to do a lot of housework and we can spare more time on our own things instead of housework and and besides, it also can resolve the conflict between your families.

✓ Exactly, because both of them can help us do a lot of housework, and we can spend more time on our own things instead of housework. Besides, they can also resolve conflicts within families.

“it also can resolve the conflict between your families”中“it”指代不明，应改为“they”指代“both of them”。“conflict”应为复数“conflicts”，因为可能有多种冲突。

× Exactly because both of them can help us to do a lot of housework and we can spare more time on our own things instead of housework and and besides, it also can resolve the conflict between your families.

✓ Exactly, because both of them can help us do a lot of housework, and we can spend more time on our own things instead of housework. Besides, they can also resolve conflicts within families.

“your families”用法不当，应该用“families”或“within families”，避免直接用“your”造成不自然。

× Exactly because both of them can help us to do a lot of housework and we can spare more time on our own things instead of housework and and besides, it also can resolve the conflict between your families.

✓ Exactly, because both of them can help us do a lot of housework, and we can spend more time on our own things instead of housework. Besides, they can also resolve conflicts within families.

“spare more time on our own things”中“on”用法错误，正确应为“spend more time on our own things”，表示“花更多时间在自己的事情上”。

× Of course, uh, when I buy a new machine, uh, from the market, I prefer to read the instructions and to make sure all the procedure is correct.

✓ Of course, when I buy a new machine from the market, I prefer to read the instructions to make sure all the procedures are correct.

“all the procedure is correct”中“procedure”应为复数“procedures”，且“is”应改为“are”以保持主谓一致。

× Of course, uh, when I buy a new machine, uh, from the market, I prefer to read the instructions and to make sure all the procedure is correct.

✓ Of course, when I buy a new machine from the market, I prefer to read the instructions to make sure all the procedures are correct.

“procedure”应为复数形式“procedures”，因为通常有多个步骤。

× And I also need to read all the details to make sure, uh, I uh, do something wrong on.

✓ And I also need to read all the details to make sure I don't do anything wrong.

“do something wrong on”中“on”多余且不正确，正确表达是“do anything wrong”，表示“做错事”。

× Yes, I think the instructions give us a brief introduction for this machine and also give some details for a overview and besides it also gives some notice or warning when you using it.

✓ Yes, I think the instructions give us a brief introduction to this machine and also provide some details for an overview. Besides, they also give some notices or warnings when you use it.

“introduction for”应为“introduction to”，“a overview”应为“an overview”，“notice”应为复数“notices”，“when you using it”应为“when you use it”。这些都是介词、冠词和动词形式的错误。

× Yes, I think the instructions give us a brief introduction for this machine and also give some details for a overview and besides it also gives some notice or warning when you using it.

✓ Yes, I think the instructions give us a brief introduction to this machine and also provide some details for an overview. Besides, they also give some notices or warnings when you use it.

“a overview”中“overview”以元音音素开头，冠词应为“an”。

× Yes, I think the instructions give us a brief introduction for this machine and also give some details for a overview and besides it also gives some notice or warning when you using it.

✓ Yes, I think the instructions give us a brief introduction to this machine and also provide some details for an overview. Besides, they also give some notices or warnings when you use it.

“when you using it”中“using”应改为动词原形“use”，因为这是一个时间状语从句，谓语动词应为一般现在时。