Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时应避免语法错误，如“avoid tearing”表达不准确，应改为“avoid hand washing”或“avoid manual labor”。此外，回答可以更自然流畅，增加连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: My favourite machine at home is definitely the washing machine because it saves me a lot of time and effort. For example, I just need to put my clothes in, and after about an hour, they come out fresh and clean, which is very convenient. Therefore, it helps me avoid the tedious task of hand washing.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如“he but she soon came appreciated them”应改为“but she soon appreciated them”。建议注意句子结构和时态一致性，提升表达准确性。

예시: Yes, definitely. Both washing machines and sweeping machines are important for housework because they save a lot of time and effort. For example, my mum didn't pay much attention to the sweeping machine at first, but she soon appreciated it because it makes cleaning much easier.

제안: 回答较好，但“read the message”表达不准确，应为“read the instructions”。建议避免重复单词，保持语言简洁自然。

예시: Yes, I usually read the instructions when I don't know how to use a machine. For example, if it's a new device, I read the instructions carefully to use it correctly and efficiently. This helps me avoid mistakes and save time.

제안: 回答内容完整且表达清晰，但“use instructions carefully”表达不够准确，建议改为“follow instructions carefully”。可以适当增加连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: Yes, I think it's very important to follow instructions carefully. By doing so, you can avoid making mistakes and save time. Moreover, using the machine correctly can make the experience much more enjoyable.

× Well, my favorite machine at home is definitely washing machine because it saves me a lot of time and effort.

✓ Well, my favorite machine at home is definitely the washing machine because it saves me a lot of time and effort.

这里缺少了定冠词“the”，因为“washing machine”是特指家里的洗衣机，应该用“the”来限定。

× For example, my mum didn't pay much attention to sweeping machine but he but she soon came appreciated them because they make clean much easier.

✓ For example, my mum didn't pay much attention to the sweeping machine but she soon came to appreciate them because they make cleaning much easier.

“sweeping machine”前缺少定冠词“the”，且“he but she”中“he”是多余的，应删除；“came appreciated”应为“came to appreciate”；“make clean much easier”中“clean”应改为动名词“cleaning”。

× For example, my mum didn't pay much attention to sweeping machine but he but she soon came appreciated them because they make clean much easier.

✓ For example, my mum didn't pay much attention to the sweeping machine but she soon came to appreciate them because they make cleaning much easier.

句中出现了“he but she”，这里“he”是错误的代词，应删除，只保留“she”。

× For example, my mum didn't pay much attention to sweeping machine but he but she soon came appreciated them because they make clean much easier.

✓ For example, my mum didn't pay much attention to the sweeping machine but she soon came to appreciate them because they make cleaning much easier.

“make clean much easier”中“clean”应为动名词形式“cleaning”，表示“使清洁变得更容易”。

× I usually read the instructions when I don't know how to use the machine.

✓ I usually read the instructions when I don't know how to use the machine.

此句无明显介词错误，保持原句。

× if it's a new device, I will read the message to use it correctly and efficiently.

✓ If it's a new device, I will read the manual to use it correctly and efficiently.

“message”用词不当，正确应为“manual”（说明书），这是对机器使用说明的正确称呼。

× Yes, I think it's very important to use instructions carefully.

✓ Yes, I think it's very important to follow instructions carefully.

“use instructions”表达不准确，正确表达应为“follow instructions”，即“遵循说明”。

× By doing so, you can avoid making mistakes and save your time.

✓ By doing so, you can avoid making mistakes and save time.

“save your time”中“your”多余，通常表达为“save time”。