Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够自然，句子较长且重复，建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并使用更准确的词汇。

예시: My favourite machine at home is the vacuum cleaner because I have a busy schedule and it helps me keep the floor clean without spending much time.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和用词不当，如“a center machine”不明确，且表达重复。建议使用更准确的词汇，简洁表达观点，并注意句子连贯。

예시: Yes, I believe washing and sweeping machines are essential nowadays because people are very busy, and these machines save time and effort in cleaning their homes.

제안: 回答不完整且有语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议完整回答问题，避免口头语，使用连贯的句子表达观点。

예시: Yes, I usually read the instructions before using a machine because it helps me understand how to operate it properly and avoid mistakes.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和不自然的表达，如“the machine have the certain waves to run”不清楚。建议使用准确表达，避免口头语，清晰说明理由。

예시: Yes, it is very important to read the instructions before using a machine because they explain how the machine works and how to use it safely and effectively.

× I really like the cleaning machine in my home because I have really tight schedule every day so I have I don't really have time to clean up and to do some household work, so the cleaning machine can help me to keep the floor.

✓ I really like the cleaning machines in my home because I have a really tight schedule every day so I don't really have time to clean up and to do some household work, so the cleaning machines can help me to keep the floor clean.

“schedule”应为复数形式“schedules”，因为表示每天都有紧张的日程安排；“a really tight schedule”前应加冠词“a”；“I have I don't really have”重复，应删去多余部分；“cleaning machine”应改为复数形式“cleaning machines”，与上下文保持一致。

× Ah yes, I do think they are quite important, especially modern times, because nowadays people usually have to really tight schedules in their life, so it will be very hard for them to spare some time to clean up their house.

✓ Ah yes, I do think they are quite important, especially in modern times, because nowadays people usually have really tight schedules in their lives, so it will be very hard for them to spare some time to clean up their house.

“have to really tight schedules”中“to”多余，应去掉；“life”应为复数“lives”，因为指代多个人的生活；“especially modern times”前应加介词“in”。

× So so a center machine can help them to do that and they will actually save their efforts.

✓ So a cleaning machine can help them to do that and they will actually save their efforts.

“a center machine”应为“a cleaning machine”，原句中“center”用词错误，应改为“cleaning”；“So so”重复，应删去多余的“so”。

× Yes, I usually do that because actually without that instruction it will be really hard for me to grab the uh, basic skill of the machine.

✓ Yes, I usually do that because actually without those instructions it will be really hard for me to grasp the basic skills of the machine.

“that instruction”应为复数“those instructions”，因为通常说明书是复数；“grab”用词不当，应改为“grasp”；“basic skill”应为复数“basic skills”。

× Yes. I think it's super important to read the instruction before using a machine uh, because, umm, the machine uh, have the certain waves to run.

✓ Yes. I think it's super important to read the instructions before using a machine, because the machine has certain ways to run.

“instruction”应为复数“instructions”；“the machine have”主谓不一致，应改为“the machine has”；“waves”应为“ways”，原词拼写错误。

× So the instruction can give you the basic knowledge about that machine and you will know clearly about this function and how it's operate in his own way.

✓ So the instructions can give you the basic knowledge about that machine and you will clearly know about its functions and how it operates in its own way.

“how it's operate”中“operate”应为第三人称单数形式“operates”；“this function”应为复数“its functions”；“his own way”指代机器，应改为“its own way”；“know clearly”顺序调整为“clearly know”更自然。