Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cevabınızda bazı dilbilgisi hataları ve anlam karışıklıkları var. "Inconvenient" kelimesi yanlış kullanılmış, doğrusu "convenient" olmalı. Ayrıca cümlelerinizde daha akıcı ve doğal ifadeler kullanmalısınız. Cümlenizi daha kısa ve net tutarak, gereksiz tekrarları önleyin.

예시: My favorite machine at home is the coffee maker because it brews coffee quickly and easily. It is very convenient and helps me save money. Using it makes my mornings more enjoyable.

제안: Cümlenizde dilbilgisi ve kelime kullanımı hataları mevcut. "You have to head at the home" ifadesi anlam açısından yanlış. Daha doğal ve doğru ifadeler kullanmalısınız. Ayrıca cümlenizi daha açık ve akıcı hale getirmek için bağlaçlar kullanabilirsiniz.

예시: Yes, washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they help clean the house quickly and easily. They save time and effort, making household chores more manageable.

제안: Cümlenizde bazı dilbilgisi hataları ve kelime eksiklikleri var. "Instruction" yerine "instructions" kullanmalısınız. Ayrıca "uh" gibi dolgu kelimelerinden kaçının. Cümlenizi daha akıcı ve doğru hale getirmek için yapıyı basitleştirin.

예시: To be honest, I don't usually read the instructions before using machines, even if they are new. I usually learn how to use them while cleaning the house.

제안: Cümlenizde tekrarlar ve dilbilgisi hataları var. "More easier" ifadesi yanlıştır, doğrusu "easier" olmalıdır. Ayrıca dolgu kelimelerinden kaçının ve cümlenizi daha net ve akıcı yapın.

예시: I don't think it's important to read the instructions because I usually learn how to use machines while cleaning the house. I find this method easier and more practical.

× Therefore the coffee makers are my favorite machines at my home.

✓ Therefore the coffee maker is my favorite machine at my home.

'Coffee maker' should be singular because the student refers to a single favorite machine. Using plural 'coffee makers' and 'machines' is incorrect here as it does not match the singular subject.

× These are very efficient and inconvenient because it's brews a coffee quickly and easily and also they help me save my money and makes umm more enjoyable my mornings.

✓ These are very efficient and convenient because they brew coffee quickly and easily, and they also help me save money and make my mornings more enjoyable.

The word 'inconvenient' is incorrect; it should be 'convenient' to express a positive attribute. 'It's brews' is grammatically wrong; 'they brew' is correct to match plural subject. 'Makes umm more enjoyable my mornings' has wrong word order and verb form; it should be 'make my mornings more enjoyable.' Also, 'save my money' is better as 'save money'.

× Yes, these machines are one of the important machines that you have to head at the home because they provide to clean up the house easily and quickly.

✓ Yes, these machines are some of the important machines that you have to have at home because they help clean up the house easily and quickly.

'One of the important machines' is incorrect when referring to plural 'these machines'; it should be 'some of the important machines.' 'Have to head' is a wrong phrase; it should be 'have.' 'Provide to clean up' is incorrect; 'help clean up' is the correct expression.

× I don't usually read the instruction before I use the machines, even if they are new at home.

✓ I don't usually read the instructions before I use the machines, even if they are new at home.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions' because it refers to multiple steps or guidelines.

× I generally learn how the machines uh supposed to use during the clean up the house.

✓ I generally learn how the machines are supposed to be used during cleaning up the house.

Missing auxiliary verb 'are' and passive form 'be used' are needed. 'During the clean up the house' is incorrect; it should be 'during cleaning up the house' or 'while cleaning the house.'

× I usually learn how to use the machines while I'm cleaning the house or trying to find out how to how these machines uh, supposed to use at home.

✓ I usually learn how to use the machines while I'm cleaning the house or trying to find out how these machines are supposed to be used at home.

The phrase 'how to how these machines uh, supposed to use' is incorrect and redundant. It should be 'how these machines are supposed to be used.' The passive voice is necessary here.

× I find it, it's much more easier and practical.

✓ I find it much easier and more practical.

'More easier' is incorrect because 'easier' is already a comparative adjective; 'much easier' is correct. Also, 'it's' is unnecessary and incorrect here.