Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer needs to be clearer and more natural. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add specific details using correct tense and vocabulary. Avoid unclear phrases like 'My favorite machine is on' and use linking words to connect ideas.

예시: My favourite machine at home is the microwave oven because I enjoy cooking. For example, last week I baked a cake in it, and it turned out delicious.

제안: Your answer should be more coherent and grammatically correct. Use linking words to explain your opinion clearly and provide specific reasons. Also, avoid contradictory statements and improve sentence structure.

예시: I think washing and sweeping machines are quite important because they save time and energy. Although people did not use them decades ago, nowadays many prefer these machines for convenience.

제안: Your answer is understandable but can be improved by using proper sentence structure and linking words. Start with a clear topic sentence and then explain with specific details.

예시: Honestly, I usually do not read instructions before using a machine. However, if I am unsure how to operate it, I read the instructions because they help me use the machine correctly.

제안: Your answer is relevant but needs better grammar and linking words to improve clarity. Use specific reasons and organise your ideas logically.

예시: Yes, I think it is important to read instructions because they help people operate machines properly. Moreover, following instructions helps maintain the machine, which can extend its lifespan.

× Last week I cook a cake on it and it was outrageous.

✓ Last week I cooked a cake in it and it was outrageous.

The sentence refers to a past event ('Last week'), so the verb should be in the past tense. 'Cook' should be changed to 'cooked' to match the past tense context.

× It can help people to save time and energy but this thing do not make it important.

✓ They can help people to save time and energy but this does not make them important.

The subject 'these machines' is plural, so the pronouns and verbs should agree in number. 'It' should be 'they', and 'do not' should be 'does not' if singular, but since subject is plural, 'do not' is correct. However, 'this thing' is incorrect; it should be 'this' or 'that' referring to the idea. Corrected to 'this does not make them important' for clarity and agreement.

× since previous decades people are not using these machine but in this couple of year people are preferring these machines.

✓ since previous decades people have not been using these machines but in the past couple of years people have been preferring these machines.

'Machine' should be plural 'machines' to agree with 'these'. Also, the tense is better expressed in present perfect continuous to indicate ongoing action from past to present.

× I do not read while using machine, but sometimes when I do not know how to operate a machine, that time I read instruction it can help me to operate the machine easily.

✓ I do not read while using a machine, but sometimes when I do not know how to operate a machine, I read the instructions; they can help me operate the machine easily.

The article 'a' is missing before 'machine'. 'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions' as it usually refers to multiple steps. Also, the sentence structure is improved by splitting into two clauses and correcting pronouns.

× Yes, I feel it's sometime important to read instruction it because by reading instruction people can easily control the machine and in help it also help to maintain the machine and by well maintaining the machine can survive for a long time.

✓ Yes, I feel it's sometimes important to read instructions because by reading instructions people can easily control the machine and it also helps to maintain the machine; by maintaining it well, the machine can last for a long time.

'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions'. The sentence is long and run-on; it is corrected for clarity and grammar, including verb agreement and article use.