Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: حاول تقليل التكرار في إجابتك واستخدم جمل أكثر وضوحًا وترتيبًا. مثلاً، بدلاً من تكرار كلمة "uh" و"clothes"، استخدم جمل متماسكة وواضحة تعبر عن فكرتك بشكل مباشر.

예시: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because I have three children and a lot of laundry. It helps me save time by washing their clothes efficiently, so I can focus on other tasks.

제안: حاول تحسين تركيب الجمل واستخدام كلمات مناسبة وواضحة. تجنب الأخطاء النحوية وكن أكثر تحديدًا في شرح أهمية هذه الأجهزة.

예시: Yes, both washing machines and vacuum cleaners are very important to me because they save a lot of time, allowing me to complete other tasks efficiently.

제안: انتبه لاستخدام الكلمات الصحيحة مثل "instructions" بدلاً من "instructor"، وحاول أن تكون الجمل أكثر دقة وترتيبًا لتوضيح فكرتك بشكل أفضل.

예시: Of course, I always read the instructions before using a machine to ensure it works properly and to avoid wasting time.

제안: حاول استخدام الكلمات الصحيحة مثل "instructions" بدلاً من "structure"، وانهِ الجملة بشكل واضح. ركز على التعبير عن أهمية قراءة التعليمات بدقة وبشكل كامل.

예시: Yes, I believe it is important to read the instructions before using a machine to make sure it functions correctly and to prevent any damage.

× My favorite machine is the washing machine, uh, because I have 3 kids and uh, I have a lot of work. Uh, when I have uh, clothes, we go in the machine and put their clothes, clothes in machine and they go to complete another work.

✓ My favorite machine is the washing machine, uh, because I have 3 kids and uh, I have a lot of work. Uh, when I have clothes, I put the clothes in the machine and then I go to complete other work.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'we go in the machine' and 'put their clothes, clothes in machine' which is grammatically incorrect and unclear. The subject should be singular 'I' to match the action, and 'clothes' is plural but does not need 'their' here. Also, 'another work' is incorrect; 'other work' is the correct phrase. The correction improves subject-verb agreement and proper plural usage.

× Actually is washing machine as whips machine is important for me because I have a lot of uh work and this machine can save my time to do another work.

✓ Actually, the washing machine and the vacuum cleaner are important for me because I have a lot of work and these machines can save my time to do other work.

The sentence has singular/plural inconsistency and incorrect noun usage. 'Whips machine' is likely a mishearing of 'whip machine' or 'vacuum cleaner'. Also, 'this machine' should be 'these machines' to match plural subjects. 'Another work' should be 'other work'. The correction fixes plural forms and clarifies the meaning.

× Of course I read the instructor before using a machine to make sure that this machine is not broke and to save my time. As you say, I have a lot of work.

✓ Of course I read the instructions before using a machine to make sure that this machine is not broken and to save my time. As you say, I have a lot of work.

The word 'instructor' is incorrect here; it should be 'instructions'. Also, 'is not broke' is incorrect; the past participle 'broken' is needed after 'is'. The correction fixes the pronoun and verb form errors.

× Actually, yes, I trust to read the the structure before they use the machine to to ensure that this machine is not a block and.

✓ Actually, yes, I trust reading the instructions before using the machine to ensure that this machine is not broken.

The sentence has multiple errors: 'trust to read the the structure' is incorrect; it should be 'trust reading the instructions'. 'They use the machine' is unclear and inconsistent with the speaker's perspective. 'Not a block' is incorrect; the correct term is 'not broken'. The correction clarifies pronoun use and corrects vocabulary and grammar.