Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时语言不够自然，有语法和表达错误，且最后一句话不完整。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免口语化的犹豫词，且注意句子完整性。

예시: My favourite machine at home is the air conditioner because it keeps me cool during hot summers and warm in cold winters, making my life much more comfortable.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整，且使用了过多的填充词。建议使用连贯的句子，避免重复和不完整表达。

예시: I think washing machines are essential because they save time and effort. However, sweeping machines are not necessary for me since I live in a small house and cleaning is easy without them.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和不完整句子，且重复使用连接词。建议注意句子结构完整，避免重复，并用更准确的表达。

예시: I usually don't read instructions because they are often long and hard to understand. Besides, most machines today are user-friendly, so I can figure out how to use them easily.

제안: 回答中句子结构不完整，表达不够连贯。建议使用完整句子，避免口语化的犹豫词，并用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: I don't think it's always necessary to read instructions because many machines, like TVs, air conditioners, and washing machines, are designed to be user-friendly with only a few buttons.

× So it really how to say makes my life.

✓ So it really, how to say, makes my life better.

句子中“how to say”用法不当，应该用逗号隔开并补充完整表达，使句子通顺。

× To me, a washing machine is as essential at my home because, uh, it saves a lot of time and effort.

✓ To me, a washing machine is essential in my home because, uh, it saves a lot of time and effort.

介词用错，应该用'in my home'表示“在我家”，而不是'at my home'。

× However, uh, a sweeping machine's not necessary for me because I am living in a quite small house and cleaning it's quite easy and can be found quickly without.

✓ However, uh, a sweeping machine is not necessary for me because I live in a quite small house and cleaning is quite easy and can be done quickly without it.

句中'cleaning it's'错误，应该是'cleaning is'，且句尾缺少宾语，需补充'without it'。

× Moreover, uh, most machines nowadays are designed to be user friendly and I found it very easy to figure out how does it work.

✓ Moreover, uh, most machines nowadays are designed to be user friendly and I find it very easy to figure out how it works.

疑问句语序错误，陈述句中应为'how it works'，而不是'how does it work'。

× However, however, sometimes I doing.

✓ However, however, sometimes I do it.

动词后缺少助动词，'doing'应改为'do it'，使句子完整。

× Like TV, air conditioner, washing machine with those are designed user friendly with only a few buttons.

✓ Like TV, air conditioner, and washing machine, those are designed to be user friendly with only a few buttons.

缺少连词'and'，且'user friendly'前应加不定式'to be'，使表达正确。