Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
What is your favourite machine in your home?
수험생
I would say the washing machine is definitely my favorite in my home. The reason is that it is really convenient for me to keep hygiene and it saves me a tremendous amount of time and efforts.
시험관
Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?
수험생
Definitely, yes. I think washing machines and the sweeping machines are really crucial. They can help people to save a significant amount of time and efforts.
시험관
Do you read the instructions before using a machine?
수험생
Of course, in my opinion it is really crucial to read the instructions before using the machine. It can prevent some mistakes.
시험관
Do you think it is important to read the instructions?
수험생
Definitely, yes, it is really crucial to read the instructions. It can prevent some mistakes and help us to understand how to use the machine or complete the tasks correctly.
평가
총점
Part 1
What is your favourite machine in your home?
점수: 85.0제안: 回答较为自然且内容相关，但表达略显重复，且“time and efforts”应为“time and effort”。建议使用更多连接词丰富句子结构，避免重复表达。
예시: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it helps me maintain hygiene efficiently. Moreover, it saves a lot of my time and effort, allowing me to focus on other tasks.
Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?
점수: 80.0제안: 回答直接但内容重复，且“time and efforts”应为“time and effort”。建议增加具体原因或例子，并使用连接词使回答更连贯。
예시: Definitely, washing machines and sweeping machines are essential because they significantly reduce the time and effort needed for household chores, making daily life more convenient.
Do you read the instructions before using a machine?
점수: 75.0제안: 回答简短且缺乏细节，建议增加具体原因和连接词，使回答更完整和自然。
예시: Of course, I always read the instructions before using a machine because it helps me avoid mistakes and ensures I use the device safely and effectively.
Do you think it is important to read the instructions?
점수: 85.0제안: 回答内容较好，但表达略显简单，建议使用更多连接词和具体细节，使回答更丰富。
예시: Definitely, reading the instructions is important because it not only prevents mistakes but also helps us understand the correct way to operate the machine and complete tasks efficiently.
문법
× it saves me a tremendous amount of time and efforts.
✓ it saves me a tremendous amount of time and effort.
“effort”在这里是不可数名词，表示“努力”，不需要复数形式。应使用单数形式“effort”。
× They can help people to save a significant amount of time and efforts.
✓ They can help people to save a significant amount of time and effort.
同样，“effort”作为不可数名词，不应使用复数形式“efforts”，应改为单数形式“effort”。
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