Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时应避免口语化的填充词，如“Yeah, maybe”，并且句子结构应更清晰。可以先直接回答问题，然后用具体细节支持观点，避免重复表达。

예시: My favourite machine at home is a robot vacuum cleaner because it helps me clean the room efficiently. Moreover, it saves me time and keeps my hands clean.

제안: 回答应更直接，避免口语化表达如“you know”。句子应更连贯，使用连接词使观点更清晰。

예시: I think washing machines and sweeping machines are useful because they save a lot of time. Although people can do these tasks manually, machines make the process faster and more convenient.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，应注意句子结构和用词准确。建议使用更正式和清晰的表达。

예시: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because they explain how to operate it safely. For example, some machines have sharp parts that could cause injury if not handled properly.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，如动词形式错误，应注意主谓一致和时态。表达应更具体，避免模糊词汇如“or something”。

예시: Yes, it is very important to read the instructions because they provide detailed information on how to use the machine correctly and even offer guidance on basic repairs.

× Yeah, maybe it's a robot which can help me to clean the room and I think it's very convenient and I will not dirt my hand after using it.

✓ Yeah, maybe it's a robot which can help me clean the room and I think it's very convenient and I will not get my hands dirty after using it.

动词help后面不需要加to，直接用动词原形clean。'dirt my hand'表达不正确，应该用get my hands dirty，表示弄脏手。

× Actually, I don't think they're important because you know, all those things people can do as well. But it will spend a lot of time on it and I think maybe it's just reduce the time you will spend on it.

✓ Actually, I don't think they're important because, you know, people can do all those things as well. But it will take a lot of time, and I think maybe it just reduces the time you will spend on it.

'will spend a lot of time on it'中主语是it，应该用take time而不是spend time。'it's just reduce'中动词形式错误，应该用第三人称单数形式reduces。

× Yes, actually, because with all the instructions I will have no idea of how to use it.

✓ Yes, actually, without all the instructions, I will have no idea how to use it.

句子结构不清晰，应该用without引导否定条件，且'no idea of how to use it'中of多余，正确表达是'no idea how to use it'。

× And sometimes it's really important to read it before using because there's some like some sharp objects in the machine and maybe hurt you.

✓ And sometimes it's really important to read it before using because there are some sharp objects in the machine that may hurt you.

'there's some like some sharp objects'表达重复且不准确，应该用there are some sharp objects。'maybe hurt you'应改为that may hurt you，使用关系代词引导定语从句。

× Yes, definitely. Just as I mentioned before, it's very important to read it because it's include various details of using the machine and it also give you some idea of repairing it or something.

✓ Yes, definitely. Just as I mentioned before, it's very important to read it because it includes various details about using the machine and it also gives you some idea about repairing it or something.

'it's include'和'it also give'动词形式错误，应该用第三人称单数includes和gives。'details of using'应改为'details about using'更自然。