Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
What is your favourite machine in your home?
수험생
As for me, my favorite machine is washing machine, definitely. It helps me every day to wash all the dishes, uh, and uh, cope with, uh, a lot of dirty stuff.
시험관
Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?
수험생
Yeah, I definitely think that washing machines and sweeping machines are essential in the house. I have, uh, both of them and, uh, they help me every day with my, uh, housework routine.
시험관
Do you read the instructions before using a machine?
수험생
Honestly, I've never read, uh, these instructions before using, uh, adding machines. I always, uh, try to understand, uh, how machines work by, uh, using it in practice.
시험관
Do you think it is important to read the instructions?
수험생
I think it's not necessary to read the, the instructions. Uh, for example, uh, two weeks ago I bought a new machine and I uh, waste, wasted an instruction And uh, I understand how it works by experimenting with the buttons.
평가
총점
Part 1
What is your favourite machine in your home?
점수: 65.0제안: Ваш ответ содержит много пауз и нечетких выражений, таких как "uh" и "as for me". Также вы неправильно указали функцию стиральной машины, говоря, что она моет посуду, что снижает естественность и точность ответа. Рекомендуется использовать более точные и ясные формулировки, избегать лишних слов и пауз.
예시: My favorite machine at home is the washing machine. It helps me clean my clothes efficiently every day, saving me a lot of time and effort.
Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?
점수: 70.0제안: В вашем ответе много пауз и повторений, что снижает плавность речи. Также стоит использовать более разнообразную лексику и связующие слова для улучшения связности и естественности ответа.
예시: Yes, I believe washing machines and vacuum cleaners are essential household appliances because they make daily chores much easier and save a lot of time.
Do you read the instructions before using a machine?
점수: 60.0제안: Ваш ответ содержит много пауз и нечетких выражений, а также ошибку в названии "adding machines" вместо правильного термина. Рекомендуется говорить более уверенно, избегать лишних пауз и использовать правильную лексику.
예시: Honestly, I usually don't read the instructions before using a machine. Instead, I prefer to learn how it works by trying it out myself.
Do you think it is important to read the instructions?
점수: 55.0제안: В ответе много пауз, повторов и грамматических ошибок, например, "waste, wasted an instruction". Также стоит использовать более связные и точные выражения, чтобы сделать ответ более естественным и понятным.
예시: I don't think it's always necessary to read the instructions. For example, when I bought a new machine two weeks ago, I learned how to use it by experimenting with the buttons.
문법
× As for me, my favorite machine is washing machine, definitely.
✓ As for me, my favorite machine is the washing machine, definitely.
The noun 'washing machine' is a singular countable noun and requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific item known to both speaker and listener. Omitting 'the' before 'washing machine' is incorrect in this context.
× Honestly, I've never read, uh, these instructions before using, uh, adding machines.
✓ Honestly, I've never read, uh, these instructions before using, uh, washing machines.
The word 'adding machines' is likely a mispronunciation or incorrect word choice. The context suggests the student meant 'washing machines.' Using the correct plural noun is important for clarity and accuracy.
× Uh, for example, uh, two weeks ago I bought a new machine and I uh, waste, wasted an instruction And uh, I understand how it works by experimenting with the buttons.
✓ Uh, for example, uh, two weeks ago I bought a new machine and I wasted the instruction, and uh, I understood how it works by experimenting with the buttons.
The verb 'waste' should be in the past tense 'wasted' to match the past time reference 'two weeks ago.' Also, 'an instruction' is incorrect; it should be 'the instruction' because it refers to a specific instruction manual. Additionally, 'understand' should be in past tense 'understood' to maintain tense consistency.
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