Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 질문에 직접 답하고 명확한 주제문을 먼저 말하세요. 문법과 어순 오류(예: "I'd like to like it", "is very cooler", "ice food")를 고치고 구체적 이유와 예를 한두 문장으로 덧붙이세요. 연결어(for example, because)로 문장을 자연스럽게 이어 말하세요.

예시: My favourite machine at home is the refrigerator. I like it because it keeps food fresh and cool for a long time. For example, it stores fruits and leftovers safely, so I can prepare meals in advance and reduce food waste.

제안: 직접적이고 자연스러운 표현을 사용하세요(예: "washing machines and vacuum cleaners"). 숫자나 어색한 단어는 피하고 문법을 바로잡으세요. 이유를 구체적으로 설명하고 연결어(so, because, therefore)를 사용해 논리를 완성하세요.

예시: Yes, I think washing machines and vacuum cleaners are very important. They save a lot of time and make household chores easier. As a result, I can focus on work or study instead of spending hours cleaning.

제안: 짧은 주제문으로 시작하고 이유를 명확히 설명하세요. 문법(예: "it’s very clear how to use the machine")과 어순을 고치고, 구체적 예시(예: 안전, 효율)를 덧붙이세요. 연결어(because, for example)로 문장들을 자연스럽게 잇으세요.

예시: Yes, I usually read the instructions before using a machine. Reading the manual helps me understand how to use it safely and avoid damage. For example, the instructions often explain maintenance tips that extend the machine’s life.

제안: 대답을 간단명료하게 정리하세요. 현재 문장은 의미 전달이 불명확하고 문법적으로 틀렸습니다. "Yes, it is important because..."로 시작해 이유(안전, 올바른 사용)와 구체적 결과(고장 예방 등)를 1~2문장으로 덧붙이세요. 불필요한 표현은 제거하세요.

예시: Yes, I think it is important to read instructions because they explain the correct and safe way to use a machine. If I follow the instructions, I can avoid accidents and reduce the chance of breaking the device.

× I think a machine I'd like to like it is refrigerator is very good because it's very cooler than before and ice food.

✓ I think a machine I like is the refrigerator because it is much cooler than before and it keeps food cold.

Pronoun 'it' was redundant and misplaced; 'I'd like to like it' is incorrect. Use 'I like' to state preference. Add the definite article 'the' before 'refrigerator'. 'Very cooler' is incorrect comparative; use 'much cooler' or 'much colder'. 'Ice food' is unclear; use 'keeps food cold'. Suggestions: remove redundant pronouns, use correct article, and form comparatives properly. Grammar problem type ID: 12

× Yes, 2 motions, uh, are very important to me because it's very convenient and more efficient that than before.

✓ Yes, two appliances are very important to me because they are convenient and more efficient than before.

'2 motions' is incorrect word choice and number spelling; use 'two' and a correct noun like 'appliances' or 'machines'. 'It's' refers to singular but sentence needs plural 'they' to match. Remove extra word 'that'. Suggestions: spell out numbers in speech transcripts, use appropriate noun, and ensure pronoun number agreement. Grammar problem type ID: 1

× Yes, I usually read instructions before using a machine because it's very clear that this machine use, so I think it's very useful.

✓ Yes, I usually read the instructions before using a machine because the instructions make the machine's use very clear, so I think they are very useful.

Phrase 'this machine use' is ungrammatical; need possessive form 'machine's use' or rephrase 'how to use the machine'. Also add article 'the' before 'instructions'. Ensure subject consistency: 'instructions' plural requires 'they are'. Suggestions: use possessive or 'how to use the machine' and match verb forms and articles. Grammar problem type ID: 10

× Yes, I think it made me in stroke the right way. So I think I want to go right away. I must.

✓ Yes, I think it helped me use the machine in the right way, so I feel confident to start using it immediately.

Original sentences are fragmented and contain incorrect phrases: 'made me in stroke the right way' is unintelligible. 'I want to go right away. I must.' is awkward. Rephrase to 'helped me use the machine in the right way' and 'start using it immediately' to convey intent. Suggestions: use clear verbs like 'helped', avoid literal translations, and combine ideas into coherent sentences. Grammar problem type ID: 26