Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar and clarity. Begin with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms and articles, and add one brief specific reason. Keep it natural and under five sentences. For example, say "My favourite machine is the washing machine" then give a specific benefit.

예시: My favourite machine is the washing machine because it saves me a lot of time. For example, it washes large loads quickly, so I can focus on work or study instead of doing laundry by hand.

제안: Be specific and use correct grammar and comparative forms. Start with a direct opinion, then give one or two concrete reasons using linking words (e.g., because, so). Avoid vague adjectives like "relaxable."

예시: Yes, I think washing machines and vacuum cleaners are very important because they reduce household chores. For instance, vacuuming keeps the house clean quickly, and washing machines handle large loads, so families have more free time.

제안: Answer directly and explain your alternative clearly. Use correct expressions (e.g., "instructions" not "information about introduction") and a linking phrase to justify your habit. Keep it concise and specific.

예시: I usually don't read the instructions because I prefer watching tutorial videos. For example, I watch short demonstration clips that show the settings and steps, which helps me learn faster than reading a manual.

제안: Make the reason clearer and correct grammar (use "protect" or "maintain" instead of "save it"). Start with a direct opinion, then give specific benefits of reading instructions using linking words like "because" and "so."

예시: Yes, I think reading the instructions is important because it teaches you how to use and maintain the machine properly. For example, following the care guidelines can prevent damage and extend the machine's lifespan.

× I think the washing machine is the best thing in my house because it's make me feel comfortable when I use it.

✓ I think the washing machine is the best thing in my house because it makes me feel comfortable when I use it.

The verb 'make' must agree with the singular third-person subject 'it' (contraction of it is). Use 'makes' for third person singular present simple. Suggestion: remember to add -s for he/she/it in present simple verbs.

× Honestly, it's our most important thing in our lives because it's make our lives more easier and relaxable.

✓ Honestly, it's the most important thing in our lives because it makes our lives easier and more relaxing.

Multiple errors: 'it' requires third person singular verb 'makes' (add -s). 'more easier' is incorrect because 'easier' already comparative; use 'easier' alone. 'relaxable' is not natural; use 'more relaxing' or 'relaxing'. Also use the definite article 'the' before 'most important thing'. Suggestion: apply subject-verb agreement, avoid redundant comparatives, and use natural adjective forms.

× To be honest I don't care about the information about introduction, but I saw a lot of videos about it and describe what I need to do.

✓ To be honest, I don't pay attention to the introduction information, but I have watched a lot of videos about it and they describe what I need to do.

Mixed tense and phrasing issues: 'don't care about the information about introduction' is awkward—use 'don't pay attention to the introduction information'. 'I saw' (simple past) conflicts with present relevance; 'I have watched' (present perfect) is better to show experience. 'and describe' lacks subject; add 'they describe'. Suggestion: keep consistent tense when referring to past experiences with present relevance and ensure each verb has a clear subject.

× It's very important because you need to read it to know about your machine and to save it and to live with you for a long time.

✓ It's very important because you need to read it to learn about your machine so you can take care of it and use it for a long time.

Awkward verbs and phrases: 'to know about your machine' better as 'to learn about your machine'. 'to save it and to live with you' is incorrect; machines are not 'saved' or 'live with you'. Use 'take care of it' and 'use it for a long time'. Also 'it's' is fine but ensure verbs match intended meaning. Suggestion: choose appropriate verbs for inanimate objects and clarify purpose clauses (so you can ...).