Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cavabınızda qrammatik səhvlər və sözlərin düzgün istifadəsi var. Daha təbii və axıcı ifadələrdən istifadə edin, məsələn, 'I memorized such as yesterday' əvəzinə 'Yes, I am good at memorising things. For example, I clearly remember watching the Formula One race with my family yesterday, which was one of my best memories.' kimi ifadə edin. Cümlələri daha qısa və məntiqli qurun.

예시: Yes, I am good at memorising things. For example, I clearly remember watching the Formula One race with my family yesterday. It was very fast and exciting, and I enjoyed seeing my favorite team compete.

제안: Cümlələrinizdə qrammatik səhvlər və sözlərin səhv ardıcıllığı var. Daha aydın və düzgün ifadə edin. Məsələn, 'I think I have never forgotten anything important, like a close friend's birthday, because I consider it important.' kimi ifadə edin.

예시: I think I have never forgotten anything important. For example, I always remember my close friends' birthdays because they are important to me.

제안: Cümlələrinizdə qrammatik səhvlər və sözlərin düzgün istifadəsi yoxdur. Daha aydın və təbii ifadə edin. Məsələn, 'I need to remember to eat meals because I have big ambitions and I am always busy with my homework and lessons, so sometimes I forget to eat.' kimi ifadə edin.

예시: I need to remember to eat meals because I have big ambitions and I am always busy with my homework and lessons, so sometimes I forget to eat.

제안: Cümlələrinizdə təkrarlar və qeyri-dəqiqliklər var. Daha təbii və axıcı ifadə edin. Məsələn, 'It's a bit difficult to answer, but I always write down important things because I know it's my responsibility.' kimi ifadə edin.

예시: It's a bit difficult to answer, but I always write down important things because I know it's my responsibility.

× Of course, yes, I memorized such as yesterday.

✓ Of course, yes, I memorized things yesterday.

The phrase 'such as yesterday' is incorrectly used here. 'Such as' is used to give examples, but 'yesterday' is a time expression, not an example of something memorized. The sentence should clearly state what was memorized or simply say 'I memorized things yesterday.'

× It's I clear.

✓ It's clear to me.

The sentence 'It's I clear' is ungrammatical. The correct structure is 'It's clear to me' to express understanding or clarity.

× I clearly remember the time I went the watch the Formula One race, which is one of my best family memories.

✓ I clearly remember the time I went to watch the Formula One race, which is one of my best family memories.

The verb 'went' requires the preposition 'to' before the verb 'watch' to indicate purpose. The phrase should be 'went to watch'.

× The race was very fast and exciting and I enjoyed watching my favorite team compete.

✓ The race was very fast and exciting, and I enjoyed watching my favorite team compete.

The sentence is mostly correct but missing a comma before 'and' to separate two independent clauses for clarity.

× I think didn't happened I forget important something but maybe it was UMM.

✓ I think it didn't happen that I forgot something important, but maybe it did.

The sentence has incorrect word order and verb forms. 'Didn't happened' should be 'didn't happen' (base form after 'did'). 'I forget' should be 'I forgot' in past tense. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity.

× For example I never forgotten UMM close friends birthday date because it's important.

✓ For example, I have never forgotten close friends' birthday dates because they are important.

'Never forgotten' requires an auxiliary verb 'have' to form present perfect tense: 'have never forgotten'. Also, 'close friends birthday date' needs possessive form 'friends'' and plural 'dates' if referring to multiple birthdays. 'It's important' should be 'they are important' to agree with plural 'dates'.

× I think it is eating meals because I have a great ambitions and I always working hard, working my homework and my lesson and subject and so I'm always forget eating meals.

✓ I think it is eating meals because I have great ambitions and I am always working hard, doing my homework and my lessons and subjects, so I always forget to eat meals.

'A great ambitions' is incorrect; 'ambitions' is plural and should not have 'a'. 'I always working' needs auxiliary verb 'am' to form present continuous: 'I am always working'. 'Working my homework' is incorrect; 'doing my homework' is correct. 'My lesson and subject' should be plural 'my lessons and subjects'. 'I'm always forget eating meals' should be 'I always forget to eat meals'.

× It is a little bit hard question for me.

✓ It is a little hard question for me.

The phrase 'a little bit hard question' is awkward. 'A little hard question' is more natural. Alternatively, 'It is a bit of a hard question for me' could be used.

× I always, uh, noted any important things because it's, I know it's my responsibility and I just, uh, should, should be doing that.

✓ I always, uh, note any important things because I know it's my responsibility and I just, uh, should be doing that.

'Noted' is past tense, but the context suggests a habitual action, so present tense 'note' is correct. 'Any important things' is acceptable but 'important things' alone is more natural here.