Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时语言不够自然，有重复和语法错误，建议简化表达，避免口头语“umm”，并且注意语法一致性。可以用更简洁的句子表达自己的记忆困难。

예시: I'm not very good at memorising things because I often forget what others tell me, even if I try to take notes. It can be quite challenging for me.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，建议使用正确的时态和句子结构，避免重复和不连贯的表达。描述事件时应更具体和条理清晰。

예시: Yes, I once forgot to bring my calculator to a math test, even though my mother reminded me. I was very worried, and my mother was quite angry.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰，建议使用正确的单复数形式和时态，避免拼写错误，句子应简洁明了。

예시: I need to remember the dates of my quizzes, tests, and school assignments. Sometimes I forget, so I have to finish them quickly before the deadline.

제안: 回答较为清晰，但有重复词汇和表达不自然的问题。建议避免重复，使用更自然的表达方式，并且可以补充更多细节。

예시: I usually use the reminder app on my Apple device to help me remember important tasks. It sends me notifications so I don't forget to do them.

× Obviously I'm not very good at doing this kind of things because memorizing is kind of difficult for me to umm, like take notes of some things and I will often, I will usually forget something that other people told me to do.

✓ Obviously I'm not very good at doing this kind of thing because memorizing is kind of difficult for me to, umm, like take notes of some things and I will often, I will usually forget something that other people told me to do.

“this kind of things”中“things”应为单数“thing”，因为“this kind of”后面接单数名词。

× Yeah, I remember very clearly that once my mother told me to take my calculator because I had a raise about mass and I need calculator, but I forgot that and it's very kind of very worry and my mother is very was very angry about.

✓ Yeah, I remember very clearly that once my mother told me to take my calculator because I had a raise about mass and I needed a calculator, but I forgot that and it was very worrying and my mother was very angry about it.

“I need calculator”应为过去时“needed a calculator”，且“calculator”前应加不定冠词“a”。“it's very kind of very worry”表达不正确，应改为“it was very worrying”。“my mother is very was very angry about”时态混乱，应为过去时“my mother was very angry about it”。

× I think the most important things I need to remember is my quiz time and my test time or something that my school's task and do about this task and I will often forgot it, so I will do it very fastly before the due.

✓ I think the most important things I need to remember are my quiz time and my test time or something about my school's tasks and doing these tasks, and I will often forget them, so I will do them very quickly before the due date.

“the most important things ... is”主谓不一致，应为“are”。“school's task”应为复数“tasks”。“forgot”应为现在时“forget”，因为前文是一般现在时。副词“fastly”错误，应为“quickly”。“before the due”不完整，应为“before the due date”。

× I think the most important things I need to remember is my quiz time and my test time or something that my school's task and do about this task and I will often forgot it, so I will do it very fastly before the due.

✓ I think the most important things I need to remember are my quiz time and my test time or something about my school's tasks and doing these tasks, and I will often forget them, so I will do them very quickly before the due date.

“do about this task”中“about”用法不当，应改为“doing these tasks”更符合表达。

× I will often forgot it, so I will do it very fastly before the due.

✓ I will often forget it, so I will do it very quickly before the due date.

“will often forgot”中“forgot”是过去式，和“will”构成将来时态冲突，应改为动词原形“forget”。

× I will do it very fastly before the due.

✓ I will do it very quickly before the due date.

“fastly”不是正确的副词形式，应使用“quickly”。

× I will often use the Apple original original like system to help me remember these important things.

✓ I will often use the Apple original-like system to help me remember these important things.

“original original like system”表达不清，应改为“original-like system”，用连字符连接形容词。

× I will take notes on this automatic system and it will remind me to do these things.

✓ I will take notes using this automatic system and it will remind me to do these things.

“take notes on this automatic system”中“on”用法不当，应改为“using”更符合表达。