Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more natural and grammatically correct by using proper verb forms and sentence structures. Also, avoid redundancy and unclear phrases. For example, instead of saying 'I was the best thinker as I memorize all questions very good as the class doesn't do it', say 'I have always been good at memorising things since childhood, often remembering questions better than my classmates.'

예시: Yes, I have always been good at memorising things. Since childhood, I could remember questions better than my classmates because my memory is very sharp and keen.

제안: Improve your answer by using correct grammar and linking words to make it coherent. Also, be specific about the event and your feelings. For example, use 'forgot' instead of 'have forgotten' for a past event, and connect ideas with 'so' or 'therefore'.

예시: Yes, I forgot something very important recently. Last month, my mother's birthday was on 12th April, but I did not remember it, so she was very upset with me because I didn't wish her on her birthday.

제안: Make your answer clearer and more structured by using proper sentence forms and linking words. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. For example, say 'I need to remember my classwork, take care of my family members, especially my younger brother, and study hard every day.'

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember my classwork and assignments given by my teachers. Also, I have to take care of my family members, especially my younger brother, and study hard to achieve good results.

제안: Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect your points. Also, correct grammar mistakes and avoid awkward phrases. For example, say 'I remember important things by noting them in my calendar or making notes and pasting them around the house.'

예시: I remember important things by writing them down in my calendar. Sometimes, I also make notes and paste them around the house so that I don't forget important dates or family occasions.

× Yes I'm very good in memorize things as in my childhood I was the best thinker as I memorize all questions very good as the class doesn't do it and my memory skills are very sharp and keen as people not have.

✓ Yes, I'm very good at memorizing things. In my childhood, I was the best thinker because I memorized all questions very well, unlike the class. My memory skills are very sharp and keen, unlike other people.

The phrase 'good in memorize' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'good at' followed by the gerund form 'memorizing'. Also, 'memorize' should be in past tense 'memorized' to match the past time reference. 'Very good' should be 'very well' as it modifies the verb. The phrase 'as people not have' is incorrect; it should be 'unlike other people' to express contrast properly.

× Yes, I have forgotten something very important nowadays.

✓ Yes, I have forgotten something very important recently.

The word 'nowadays' refers to the present time generally and is not appropriate with the present perfect tense indicating a specific recent event. 'Recently' is a better adverb to indicate a recent past event.

× Last month my mother birthday was on 12th April but I did not remember it as my mother was very upset with me because I don't wish her on her birthday.

✓ Last month, my mother's birthday was on 12th April, but I did not remember it. My mother was very upset with me because I didn't wish her on her birthday.

'Mother birthday' should be possessive 'mother's birthday'. The sentence is long and should be split for clarity. 'Don't wish' is present tense and should be past tense 'didn't wish' to match the past event. Also, commas are needed for clarity.

× I have to remember my classwork, the teacher have given me my I have to take care of my family member as well as my younger brother.

✓ I have to remember my classwork. The teacher has given it to me. I have to take care of my family members as well as my younger brother.

'Teacher have' is incorrect; the singular subject 'teacher' requires 'has'. The sentence is run-on and should be split. 'Family member' should be plural 'family members' to indicate more than one person.

× There are various important things I remember as I meant, I mentioned in my calendar the important dates or make a note and paste it on the whole of my house that I can remember the important dates of my family member or any occasions.

✓ There are various important things I remember. I mention the important dates in my calendar or make a note and paste it all over my house so that I can remember the important dates of my family members or any occasions.

The phrase 'I remember as I meant' is unclear and corrected to 'I mention'. 'Paste it on the whole of my house' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'paste it all over my house'. 'Family member' should be plural 'family members' to indicate more than one person. The sentence is also split for clarity.