Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, ví dụ như 'good remember' nên là 'good memory', 'remember games' nên là 'memory games', và câu cần rõ ràng hơn. Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đơn giản, chính xác và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: Yes, I have a good memory because I often use techniques like puzzles and memory games to train my brain. For instance, I can easily remember phone numbers after hearing them just once without much effort.

제안: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ 'get say' nên là 'I can say', 'repair and organize my plans' không phù hợp, có thể dùng 'manage my plans'. Câu cuối cũng cần rõ ràng hơn, tránh dùng từ trái nghĩa như 'insignificant' khi ý muốn nói 'important'. Hãy sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và chính xác.

예시: I can say that I rarely forget important things because I always write them down in a notebook and set reminders on my phone to manage my plans. This way, I make sure I don't miss anything important.

제안: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như 'determines' nên là 'determine', 'I'm certain quite quick' không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Ngoài ra, hãy dùng từ vựng phù hợp và câu có liên kết logic hơn.

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember to take my medications and stay determined to maintain my health. Also, I try to exercise regularly and get enough sleep because I want to improve my overall well-being.

제안: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và từ vựng, ví dụ 'have habit' nên là 'have a habit', 'repair and organize my plant' không đúng, có thể là 'manage my plans'. Câu cuối cũng cần rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi như 'the anything'. Hãy sử dụng câu đơn giản, chính xác và có liên kết logic.

예시: To remember important things, I have a habit of writing everything down in a notebook and setting reminders on my phone to manage my plans. Besides, I make sure I don't miss anything significant like financial deadlines and birthdays.

× I could say that I have a good remember because I use technique like puzzles and remember games to practical my brain and keep my my shaped.

✓ I could say that I have a good memory because I use techniques like puzzles and memory games to practice my brain and keep my mind sharp.

The word 'remember' is a verb, but here a noun 'memory' is needed. 'Technique' should be plural 'techniques' to match the context. 'Remember games' should be 'memory games' as 'memory' is the correct adjective. 'Practical' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'practice'. 'My my shaped' is incorrect; it should be 'my mind sharp' to express keeping the brain in good condition.

× I use technique like puzzles and remember games to practical my brain and keep my my shaped.

✓ I use techniques like puzzles and memory games to practice my brain and keep my mind sharp.

The singular 'technique' should be plural 'techniques' because multiple types are mentioned. This is a quantifier error where the countable noun needs to be plural when referring to more than one.

× I use technique like puzzles and remember games to practical my brain and keep my my shaped.

✓ I use techniques like puzzles and memory games to practice my brain and keep my mind sharp.

The verb 'practical' is incorrect; the correct form is 'practice' as a verb. 'Practice' is the base form here, not '-ing' form, but the original word was wrong.

× For example, I easily remember numbers and datas for such as a phone number.

✓ For example, I easily remember numbers and data such as phone numbers.

'Datas' is incorrect because 'data' is an uncountable noun and does not have a plural form. Also, 'for such as' is incorrect; it should be 'such as'. 'Phone number' should be plural 'phone numbers' to match 'numbers'.

× I recall phone number only one listened without much effort.

✓ I recall a phone number after only one listen without much effort.

The phrase 'only one listened' is incorrect; it should be 'after only one listen' to indicate the action. Also, 'phone number' needs an article 'a' before it.

× Well, get say that I rarely fail to remember crucial things because I have habit of writing everything down in a notebook and setting reminder on my phone to repair and organize my plans.

✓ Well, I would say that I rarely fail to remember crucial things because I have a habit of writing everything down in a notebook and setting reminders on my phone to prepare and organize my plans.

'Get say' is incorrect; the modal 'would' is appropriate here. 'Have habit' needs an article 'a habit'. 'Setting reminder' should be plural 'setting reminders'. 'Repair' is incorrect in this context; the correct word is 'prepare'.

× I have habit of writing everything down in a notebook and setting reminder on my phone to repair and organize my plans.

✓ I have a habit of writing everything down in a notebook and setting reminders on my phone to prepare and organize my plans.

'Setting reminder on my phone' should be 'setting reminders on my phone' to be grammatically correct and plural. Also, 'repair' is the wrong preposition; 'prepare' is the correct verb here.

× I want to be sure don't miss anything insignificant.

✓ I want to be sure I don't miss anything significant.

The sentence is missing the subject pronoun 'I' before 'don't'. Also, 'insignificant' is the opposite of the intended meaning; it should be 'significant'.

× In my daily life, I need to remember to take necessary medications and determines to maintain my health.

✓ In my daily life, I need to remember to take necessary medications and determine to maintain my health.

'Determines' is incorrect; the base form 'determine' should be used after 'to' as an infinitive verb.

× Besides, I'm trying to incorporate exercise into my daily routine and ensure I get enough sleep because I'm certain quite quick and want to improve my overall well beings.

✓ Besides, I'm trying to incorporate exercise into my daily routine and ensure I get enough sleep because I'm certain I learn quite quickly and want to improve my overall well-being.

'I'm certain quite quick' is incorrect; it should be 'I'm certain I learn quite quickly' to make sense. 'Well beings' should be 'well-being' as a singular noun.

× I have habit of writing everything down in a notebook and setting reminder on my phone to repair and organize my plant.

✓ I have a habit of writing everything down in a notebook and setting reminders on my phone to prepare and organize my plan.

'Setting reminder on my phone' should be plural 'setting reminders on my phone'. 'Repair' is incorrect; 'prepare' is the correct verb. 'Plant' is a typo and should be 'plan'.

× Beside, I want to ensure I don't miss the anything significant such as return financial exam and birthdays.

✓ Besides, I want to ensure I don't miss anything significant such as returning financial exams and birthdays.

'Beside' should be 'Besides' as an adverb. 'The anything' is incorrect; 'anything' alone is correct. 'Return financial exam' should be 'returning financial exams' to use the gerund and plural form.