Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中有语法错误和重复表达，影响了表达的自然性和清晰度。建议你直接回答问题，避免重复，并使用正确的时态和词汇。例如，可以说“I am not very good at memorising things. I often forget important details in my daily life, which sometimes causes problems.”

예시: I am not very good at memorising things. I often forget important details in my daily life, which sometimes causes problems.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，且缺少连贯的连接词。建议使用正确的时态和主谓一致，并用连接词使句子更连贯。例如：“Yes, I have often forgotten important things. For instance, I sometimes forget where I put my phone because smartphones are essential for communication and payment in daily life.”

예시: Yes, I have often forgotten important things. For instance, I sometimes forget where I put my phone because smartphones are essential for communication and payment in daily life.

제안: 你的回答较为清晰，但“taskers”一词不准确，且有口头语“uh”影响流畅度。建议使用更准确的词汇如“tasks”，并减少口头语。同时，可以用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: Well, first of all, I need to remember the tasks I have to finish each day. Therefore, to make sure I don't forget anything important, I usually write them down in my small notebook.

제안: 回答中有语法错误，如“important thing”应为“important things”，“keep chunk of my responsibility”表达不清。建议使用正确的复数形式和更准确的表达，如“keep track of my responsibilities”。

예시: Well, I usually write important things down in my small notebook. This notebook is special to me because I use it almost every day to keep track of my responsibilities.

× Oh, I'm not so very good at memory writing.

✓ Oh, I'm not very good at memorizing things.

The phrase 'memory writing' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'memorizing things' to describe the ability to remember information. Also, 'not so very good' is awkward; 'not very good' is more natural.

× Uh, things I often forgot forget important details in my daily life, which can sometimes cause big problems to me.

✓ Uh, I often forget important details in my daily life, which can sometimes cause big problems for me.

The verb tense should be present tense 'forget' to match 'often' indicating habitual action. Also, 'cause big problems to me' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'for me'.

× I have often forgotten something important for me.

✓ I have often forgotten something important to me.

The phrase 'important for me' should be 'important to me' to correctly express personal significance.

× because a smartphone are essential for communication and payment in our daily life.

✓ because a smartphone is essential for communication and payment in our daily life.

The subject 'a smartphone' is singular, so the verb should be 'is' not 'are'.

× For example, I sometimes forgot where I put my phone because a smartphone are essential for communication and payment in our daily life.

✓ For example, I sometimes forget where I put my phone because a smartphone is essential for communication and payment in our daily life.

The verb 'forgot' is past tense, but 'sometimes' indicates habitual action, so present tense 'forget' is correct.

× which can sometimes cause big problems to me.

✓ which can sometimes cause big problems for me.

The correct preposition with 'cause problems' is 'for' not 'to' when referring to the person affected.

× I have often forgotten something important for me.

✓ I have often forgotten something important to me.

The correct preposition to express personal importance is 'to' not 'for'.

× So it did.

✓ So it did.

This sentence is short and ambiguous but grammatically correct; no change needed.

× Well, first of all, I should remember the taskers that I have to, uh, finish each day.

✓ Well, first of all, I should remember the tasks that I have to, uh, finish each day.

The word 'taskers' is incorrect; the correct plural noun is 'tasks'.

× Well, I usually write important thing down in my small notebook.

✓ Well, I usually write important things down in my small notebook.

The noun 'thing' should be plural 'things' to match the context of multiple important items.

× I usually write important thing down in my small notebook.

✓ I usually write important things down in my small notebook.

The phrase 'write down' is correct; no preposition error here, but plural form needed as above.

× This notebook is special to me.

✓ This notebook is special to me.

This sentence is correct; no change needed.

× I use it almost every day to keep chunk of my responsibility.

✓ I use it almost every day to keep track of my responsibilities.

The phrase 'keep chunk of my responsibility' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'keep track of my responsibilities' to mean managing tasks or duties.