Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“used to good at”应为“used to be good at”。此外，回答中断断续续，缺乏连贯性，且没有清晰的主题句。建议练习使用完整句子，避免重复和犹豫，提升表达流畅度。

예시: I used to be good at memorising things, but recently I have become more distracted by electronic devices, especially my phone, which affects my concentration.

제안: 回答内容不清晰，表达混乱，且缺少具体细节。比如“cheap computer in my bag”不符合语境，且句子结构不完整。建议明确表达忘记的具体事情，并用连贯的句子描述。

예시: Yes, I often forget important things. For example, sometimes I put my computer in my bag but then forget where I placed it or what I planned to do next.

제안: 回答中有语法错误，如“necessary to memorizing”应为“necessary to memorise”。内容较为简单，缺少具体细节和连贯的逻辑。建议使用更准确的语法，并补充具体的例子或原因。

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember the knowledge related to my major because I have exams coming up. For instance, I often review important concepts to prepare well.

제안: 回答表达较为重复且不够流畅，缺少连贯的连接词。建议减少重复，使用连接词如“because”、“so”来增强逻辑性，并用完整句子表达。

예시: I usually remember important things better in the morning because my memory is sharper then. For example, I often recite vocabulary words in the morning but rarely do so in the evening.

× I used to good at memorizing things

✓ I used to be good at memorizing things

这里缺少了动词“be”，短语“used to”后面应接动词原形或动词短语，表示过去习惯。应改为“I used to be good at...”表示过去擅长。

× I feel am a little bit distracted by the electrical products

✓ I feel a little bit distracted by electronic products

“feel”后面应直接跟形容词或过去分词作表语，不能加“am”。另外，“electrical products”应改为“electronic products”，更符合表达习惯。

× I think I'm uh, too focusing on my phone

✓ I think I'm too focused on my phone

“too focusing”用法错误，应使用形容词“focused”来修饰主语，表示“过于专注”。

× I often forget something important, for example, uh, when I want to umm, cheap uh, computer in my bag

✓ I often forget something important, for example, when I want to find a cheap computer in my bag

“cheap”是形容词，缺少动词，且语义不完整，应补充动词“find”表示“找到”。

× But uh, but when I get the right pace, I forgot what I should do next

✓ But when I get to the right place, I forget what I should do next

“forgot”是过去式，与前文时态不一致，应改为一般现在时“forget”。另外，“pace”应为“place”。

× It's necessary to memorizing the knowledge to take

✓ It's necessary to memorize the knowledge to take

“to”后面应接动词原形，不能用动名词“memorizing”。

× I usually recite words in the morning, but in the evening I haven't. I didn't.

✓ I usually recite words in the morning, but in the evening I don't

“haven't”和“didn't”用法不当，表达否定习惯动作应使用一般现在时“don't”。