Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够自然流畅，存在重复表达，且句子结构不够清晰。建议简化表达，避免重复，并使用更准确的词汇。

예시: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. I often have to review information several times because I tend to forget it quickly, sometimes even by the next day.

제안: 回答不完整且表达不清晰，句子结构混乱。建议直接回答问题，并用完整句子说明如何避免忘记重要事情。

예시: I have never forgotten something important because I always write down my important tasks in a notebook to remind myself.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，且内容不够具体。建议使用正确的词汇和句子结构，清楚描述需要记住的具体事项。

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember to turn off the gas, lock the doors, and take my keys with me. For instance, one day I forgot to lock the door, which made me feel unsafe.

제안: 回答中有语法错误，且表达略显重复。建议使用正确的时态和更自然的表达方式，避免重复。

예시: I write important things in my notebook and review it regularly. For example, I check my notes on my phone throughout the day, even when I'm in the bathroom.

× For example, if I learn something this one by the next day I might have forgotten all of it.

✓ For example, if I learn something this one, by the next day I might have forgotten all of it.

句子中“learn”应使用过去时态“learned”或“learnt”，因为描述的是过去发生的动作。建议改为“If I learned something this one...”以符合时态要求。

× Well, I will never do it because I always keep at least on my next day's important things.

✓ Well, I will never forget because I always keep at least my next day's important things in mind.

句子中“will never do it”表达不清，应该使用“will never forget”来表达不会忘记。动词搭配错误，需改正。

× For example, if I have something really important to do tomorrow, I will write it down in my memorandum and.

✓ For example, if I have something really important to do tomorrow, I will write it down in my memorandum.

句子末尾“and”后无内容，导致句子结构不完整，应去掉“and”。

× Well, there are several things I need to do and, and I need to remember, like turning off the gas, uh, cracking the doors and picking up my key.

✓ Well, there are several things I need to do and remember, like turning off the gas, locking the doors and picking up my key.

“cracking the doors”用词错误，应为“locking the doors”。此外，重复使用“and”不必要，应简化句子结构。

× I remember one day, uh, when I got up and I found my door and knocked it.

✓ I remember one day, uh, when I got up and found my door unlocked and knocked on it.

“found my door and knocked it”表达不完整且不准确，应补充“unlocked”并改为“knocked on it”以符合习惯用法。

× I've write it down in my memorandum and I will check it over and over again.

✓ I've written it down in my memorandum and I will check it over and over again.

“I've write”中“write”应为过去分词“written”，因为“have”后需接过去分词构成现在完成时。

× For example, I pick my mobile phone every day so I can check my memorandum. Even, umm, in the bathroom.

✓ For example, I pick up my mobile phone every day so I can check my memorandum, even, umm, in the bathroom.

“pick my mobile phone”应为“pick up my mobile phone”，动词短语使用错误。句子末尾应连接完整，避免断句。