Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Ответ должен быть более структурированным и избегать повторений. Следует использовать связующие слова для логичности и избегать незавершённых фраз.

예시: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things, especially when the topic interests me. For example, I can easily remember English words and historical facts because I find them fascinating. However, I sometimes struggle with memorising formulas. Overall, I believe my memory is fairly decent.

제안: Ответ хороший, но можно добавить связующие слова для плавности и более чётко структурировать ответ.

예시: Yes, definitely. Once, I forgot to bring my homework to school, which was really embarrassing because I had spent the whole evening working on it. Unfortunately, I just left it on my desk at home.

제안: Ответ не совсем ясен и содержит грамматические ошибки. Следует чётко сформулировать мысль и использовать связующие слова.

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember important tasks such as learning English, reading books, and doing homework because they are significant for my personal growth. If I neglect learning English, I feel restless and unproductive.

제안: Ответ содержит непонятные фразы и ошибки. Нужно использовать правильную структуру и более чётко объяснить методы запоминания.

예시: I remember important things by writing my plans in a schedule and making sure to follow them. I find that writing helps me stay organized and not forget significant tasks.

× I can easily remember English words or historical facts if they find them fascinating.

✓ I can easily remember English words or historical facts if I find them fascinating.

The pronoun 'they' incorrectly refers to 'English words or historical facts'. The subject should be 'I' because it is the person who finds the topics fascinating, not the topics themselves.

× In conclusion, I would say my mem. My memory is pretty decent.

✓ In conclusion, I would say my memory is pretty decent.

The sentence is fragmented with 'my mem.' being incomplete. It should be combined into a complete sentence for clarity and correctness.

× However I just left it on my desk.

✓ However, I had just left it on my desk.

The past perfect tense 'had left' is appropriate here to indicate an action completed before another past event (forgetting homework). Also, a comma is needed after 'However'.

× I have to remember why those things in my daily life, for instance, learning English or reading books or uh, doing homework, because it's too significant in my life and if I don't learn English, I will feel restless.

✓ I have to remember those things in my daily life, for instance, learning English, reading books, or doing homework, because they are very significant to me, and if I don't learn English, I will feel restless.

The phrase 'remember why those things' is incorrect; it should be 'remember those things'. Also, 'it's too significant' should be 'they are very significant' to agree with the plural subject. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× How I remember Whitel thinks it's quite simple and I consider most people the same.

✓ How I remember things, I think it's quite simple, and I believe most people are the same.

The original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. 'Whitel' seems to be a typo for 'things'. The sentence is restructured to clarify meaning and correct grammar.

× Since I would say I'm pencil person, that's how I remember significant things.

✓ Since I would say I'm a pencil person, that's how I remember significant things.

The phrase 'I'm pencil person' lacks an article 'a'. Adding 'a' corrects the noun phrase. Also, 'pencil person' is an unusual expression but is kept as is assuming it is the student's intended phrase.