Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks clarity. Try to give a direct response first, then add specific examples without repeating the same idea. Also, avoid using filler phrases like 'like' excessively.

예시: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For example, I often remember important dates and details for my friends so they don't forget them.

제안: Your answer is a bit unclear and incomplete at the end. Try to organise your ideas logically and finish your sentences fully. Use linking words to connect your ideas and express emotions clearly.

예시: Yes, I once forgot my house keys at a restaurant. My father was quite angry but didn't say much because I was about to move to Australia, so everyone was feeling emotional at that time.

제안: Your answer covers the main points but could be clearer and more concise. Try to avoid repeating phrases and provide specific examples. Use linking words to make your answer flow better.

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember to take my vitamins and prescribed medicines on time. Also, I have to keep track of important tasks at work, such as meetings or deadlines.

제안: Your answer is honest but contains many fillers and is somewhat disorganised. Try to speak more fluently and structure your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'like'.

예시: I used to be good at memorising things, but now I often forget details quickly. Therefore, I write notes and set reminders on my phone to help me remember important information.

× Yeah, I was good at memorizing things.

✓ Yeah, I am good at memorizing things.

The question is in the present tense asking about current ability, so the answer should also be in the present tense. Using 'was' implies past ability, which does not fit the context.

× Like I was really good at that.

✓ Like I am really good at that.

Similar to the previous sentence, the present tense 'am' should be used to match the question about current ability rather than past.

× I memorized everything and everyone told me everything that I could memorize and I would later tell them so they won't forget.

✓ I memorize everything and everyone tells me everything that I can memorize and I later tell them so they don't forget.

The sentence mixes past and present tenses inconsistently. Since the question is about current ability, present tense verbs like 'memorize', 'tells', 'can', and 'don't' should be used for consistency.

× So everyone was like emotion and also he did not say anything but he was angry and frustrated because he has to go back and bring the.

✓ So everyone was emotional and also he did not say anything but he was angry and frustrated because he had to go back and bring it.

The word 'emotion' is a noun but an adjective 'emotional' is needed to describe 'everyone'. Also, 'has' should be past tense 'had' to match the past context, and the sentence was incomplete missing the object 'it'.

× because he has to go back and bring the.

✓ because he had to go back and bring it.

The verb 'has' should be in past tense 'had' to agree with the past event. Also, the sentence was incomplete and needed the object 'it' to be grammatically correct.

× like something important that I have to go.

✓ like something important that I have to do.

The verb 'go' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'do' to complete the phrase 'something important that I have to do'. This corrects the sentence structure.

× if you tell me the date today, I will forget in 2-3 hours.

✓ if you tell me today's date, I will forget it in 2-3 hours.

The phrase 'the date today' is awkward; 'today's date' is more natural. Also, the object 'it' is needed after 'forget' to clarify what will be forgotten.