Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 문법적 오류가 많으며, 의미 전달이 명확하지 않습니다. '11 method'와 'mammal application' 같은 표현은 이해하기 어렵고, 문장 구조가 부자연스럽습니다. 좀 더 명확하고 간결하게 자신의 기억 방법을 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다.

예시: No, I'm not very good at memorizing things, so I always try to use helpful methods. For example, I use a mobile app on my phone to help me remember important information.

제안: 답변이 질문에 직접적으로 답하고 있으나, 문장에 반복과 불필요한 단어가 포함되어 있습니다. 또한, 문법적 오류가 있고, 더 자연스러운 표현을 사용하는 것이 좋습니다. 간결하고 명확한 문장 구성을 연습하세요.

예시: Yes, I once forgot the deadline for an assignment in high school. I apologized to my teacher and politely asked if I could have an extension.

제안: 답변이 매우 불명확하고 문법적으로도 문제가 많아 의미 전달이 어렵습니다. 일상에서 기억해야 할 구체적인 예시를 명확하고 간결하게 제시하는 연습이 필요합니다.

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember deadlines, appointments, and important tasks. I usually use a memorization app to help me keep track of these things.

제안: 답변이 문법적으로 부정확하고, 의미 전달이 명확하지 않습니다. 'risk application'이라는 표현은 적절하지 않으며, 더 자연스러운 표현과 문장 구조를 사용하는 연습이 필요합니다.

예시: I usually use a reminder app on my phone to keep track of important tasks. Sometimes, I also tell my family about important appointments so they can help me remember.

× No, I'm not good at memorizing things so I always make an effort rather than others.

✓ No, I'm not good at memorizing things, so I always make more effort than others.

The phrase 'make an effort rather than others' is incorrect. The correct comparative form is 'make more effort than others' to compare the amount of effort. This is a singular and plural issue because 'effort' is uncountable and needs a comparative quantifier.

× 11 method that I used is that using mammal application in cell phone.

✓ The method that I use is using a memo application on my cell phone.

The original sentence has incorrect sentence structure and unclear meaning. '11 method' is likely a typo or mishearing. 'Mammal application' should be 'memo application'. Also, 'in cell phone' should be 'on my cell phone'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, I have forgotten the deadline of assignment in high school, so back then I apologized my teacher and requested politely.

✓ Yes, I forgot the deadline of an assignment in high school, so back then I apologized to my teacher and requested politely.

The present perfect 'have forgotten' is less appropriate with 'back then' which refers to a specific past time, so simple past 'forgot' is better. Also, 'apologized my teacher' is missing the preposition 'to'. 'The deadline of assignment' needs an article 'an' before 'assignment'.

× so back then I apologized my teacher and requested politely.

✓ so back then I apologized to my teacher and requested politely.

The verb 'apologize' requires the preposition 'to' when indicating the person being apologized to. Omitting 'to' is a preposition error.

× Can you, could you, umm, could you postpone the the drawing for me?

✓ Can you, could you, umm, could you postpone the deadline for me?

The phrase 'postpone the the drawing' is unclear and likely incorrect. 'Drawing' should be 'deadline' to fit context. Also, repeated 'the' is a typographical error. This is a pronoun and word choice issue.

× There are several things that I should remember such as something per deadline and appointment to a Prince and disordered things are con are contained by memorization app.

✓ There are several things that I should remember, such as deadlines and appointments, and disorganized things are contained in a memorization app.

The original sentence has multiple errors: 'something per deadline' is unclear and corrected to 'deadlines'; 'appointment to a Prince' is likely 'appointments'; 'disordered things are con are contained' is corrected to 'disorganized things are contained'; 'memorization app' is better as 'memo app'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct use of 'there are'.

× disordered things are con are contained by memorization app.

✓ disorganized things are contained in a memorization app.

The preposition 'by' is incorrect here; 'contained in' is the correct phrase to indicate something is inside or within something else.

× I usually utilize it to the risk application to prevent progress something.

✓ I usually use the reminder application to prevent missing something.

'Utilize it to the risk application' is incorrect. 'Use' is more natural than 'utilize' here. 'Risk application' is unclear; likely 'reminder application' is intended. 'Prevent progress something' is incorrect; 'prevent missing something' is correct. Prepositions and word choice are corrected.

× And sometimes I tell the important appointment to my family to recalls.

✓ And sometimes I tell my family about important appointments to help me remember.

'Tell the important appointment to my family to recalls' is incorrect. 'Tell' requires an object (person), so 'tell my family about important appointments' is correct. 'To recalls' is incorrect; 'to help me remember' clarifies the meaning. Pronoun and verb usage are corrected.