Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Ваш ответ не совсем естественный и содержит грамматические ошибки. Следует использовать правильные структуры предложений и избегать избыточности. Например, можно сказать: "Yes, I am quite good at memorising things because I often practice by doing tasks my mother gives me, and I rarely forget them."

예시: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things because I often practice by doing tasks my mother gives me, and I rarely forget them.

제안: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и звучит неестественно. Следует использовать правильные формы и более точные выражения. Например: "Yes, I have forgotten important things sometimes because everyone forgets things occasionally."

예시: Yes, I have forgotten important things sometimes because everyone forgets things occasionally.

제안: Ответ нечеткий и содержит ошибки. Следует использовать правильные слова и структуру, а также связать идеи логично. Например: "I need to remember English vocabulary and grammar every day because I want to achieve a score of 7.5 in the IELTS exam."

예시: I need to remember English vocabulary and grammar every day because I want to achieve a score of 7.5 in the IELTS exam.

제안: Ответ не очень ясный и содержит ошибки. Следует использовать правильные времена и более естественные выражения. Например: "I usually repeat the instructions my mother gives me several times, which helps me remember them."

예시: I usually repeat the instructions my mother gives me several times, which helps me remember them.

× I think I'm very well because my mother gives me some works, never I forget.

✓ I think I'm very good because my mother gives me some work, and I never forget it.

The word 'works' is incorrectly used as a plural countable noun; 'work' is uncountable in this context. Also, 'very well' should be 'very good' to describe ability. The sentence structure is improved by adding 'and' to connect clauses properly.

× Maybe yes, I have, because every peoples are forgotten something important.

✓ Maybe yes, I have, because every person has forgotten something important.

The word 'peoples' is incorrect; 'people' is plural, and 'every' requires a singular noun, so 'person' is correct. Also, 'are forgotten' should be 'has forgotten' to agree with singular subject and correct tense.

× It's very classic.

✓ It's very common.

The adjective 'classic' is not appropriate here; 'common' better expresses the intended meaning of something frequently occurring.

× I very, very need to remember English vocabularies and grammars, because I should.

✓ I really need to remember English vocabulary and grammar because I should.

'Vocabularies' and 'grammars' are incorrect plural forms; 'vocabulary' and 'grammar' are uncountable nouns. 'Very, very need' is awkward; 'really need' is more natural.

× Take an ILOS score 7.5 in the future.

✓ I want to get an IELTS score of 7.5 in the future.

The sentence lacks a subject and verb; 'Take an ILOS score 7.5' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'I want to get an IELTS score of 7.5'.

× when my mother gives me some work, I repeated her sentences and I remember it that.

✓ When my mother gives me some work, I repeat her sentences and remember them.

'Repeated' is past tense but the context suggests present habitual action, so 'repeat' is correct. 'I remember it that' is incorrect; 'remember them' correctly refers to 'sentences'. Also, 'some work' is correct as uncountable noun.