Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中有重复和语法错误，影响了表达的流畅性。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用正确的时态和词形。

예시: I am quite good at memorising things, but I usually write down words or visualize pictures to help me remember better.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议使用完整句子，注意时态一致，并且避免重复。

예시: Yes, once when I flew to Japan, I forgot to take out a utility knife from my bag, so the airport security asked me to remove it.

제안: 回答内容较好，但有语法和用词错误。建议注意冠词和形容词的正确使用，减少语气词，提升表达自然度。

예시: I am a careful person, so I need to remember my daily schedule. I usually write down my tasks for the next day and double-check them.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议使用更准确的词汇和句型，避免重复和语气词。

예시: I remember important things in two ways: I write them down in my schedule, and for memories, I rely on photographic memory.

× I think I I'm person who really good at memor memorizing things, but umm I need to write down the word or picturing the photo so I can uh, make the memory visualize visualization.

✓ I think I'm a person who is really good at memorizing things, but umm I need to write down the words or picture the photo so I can, uh, make the memory visualization.

这里动词形式使用错误。'memor memorizing'重复且错误，应使用动名词'memorizing'。此外，'picturing the photo'应改为动词原形'picture the photo'，因为前面是need to，后面应接动词原形。

× Yes, one time when I umm, fly to Japan, I forget, I forgot uh to take out the uh unity knife in my bag so and uh uh air police in Japan that mentioned me to take out and uh.

✓ Yes, one time when I flew to Japan, I forgot to take out the utility knife in my bag, and the airport police in Japan told me to take it out.

这里时态使用错误。'fly'应为过去式'flew'，'forget'应为过去式'forgot'，因为描述的是过去发生的事情。

× I'm a carefully person, so I, I need to remember my, uh, everyday schedule in my daily life.

✓ I'm a careful person, so I need to remember my everyday schedule in my daily life.

'carefully'是副词，修饰动词；这里需要形容词'careful'来修饰名词'person'。

× So, uh, I will carefully to umm, to write down the, the thing I need to do tomorrow in my schedule and double check it.

✓ So, uh, I will carefully write down the things I need to do tomorrow in my schedule and double check it.

'carefully'是副词，修饰动词，后面不应加'to'，应直接接动词原形'write'。

× So, uh, I will carefully to umm, to write down the, the thing I need to do tomorrow in my schedule and double check it.

✓ So, uh, I will carefully write down the things I need to do tomorrow in my schedule and double check it.

'thing'应为复数'things'，因为后文指多个任务。

× I remember importing thing have two ways, like, uh, one ways that I can write down the thing I need to do, uh, in the future in my schedule and other if, if it is, uh, something like memories, I will, uh, take a photographic memory.

✓ I remember important things in two ways: one way is that I can write down the things I need to do in the future in my schedule, and the other is if it is something like memories, I will use a photographic memory.

'importing thing'应为'important things'，'one ways'应为'one way'，'other'应为'the other'，量词和冠词使用错误。