Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Ваш ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткую структуру предложения. Рекомендуется использовать правильные времена и порядок слов, а также избегать повторений и излишних деталей. Попробуйте сформулировать ответ более естественно и связно.

예시: I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, I often forget where I put my keys or my phone, and I especially lose my headphones because they are small and easy to misplace.

제안: Ваш ответ достаточно информативен, но содержит ошибки в грамматике и структуре. Следует использовать правильные времена и связующие слова для улучшения связности и естественности речи.

예시: Yes, I have forgotten something important before. For example, when I was planning my vacation, I forgot to book a taxi to the airport. Consequently, on the day of my flight, all the drivers were busy, and I couldn't find a car. I was very worried that I might miss my flight and ruin my vacation.

제안: Ответ содержит повторения и нечеткие формулировки. Рекомендуется использовать более разнообразную лексику и связующие слова для улучшения плавности и точности ответа.

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember my university schedule, homework, and projects. Additionally, since I also work, I have to keep track of my work projects and my working hours.

제안: Ваш ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткие выражения. Рекомендуется использовать правильные предлоги и формы слов, а также более чётко объяснять методы запоминания.

예시: I try to make notes on my phone or in a notebook. I think this helps me remember important things that I need to do.

× I'm ashamed to admit it but unfortunately I always forgot everything fine.

✓ I'm ashamed to admit it but unfortunately I always forget everything fine.

The verb 'forgot' is in the past tense, but the adverb 'always' indicates a habitual action, which requires the present tense 'forget'.

× I never know where is my key, where is my phone, headphone especially I always lose my headphones because it's a small stuff so I never can find it.

✓ I never know where my key is, where my phone is, especially my headphones. I always lose my headphones because they're small items, so I can never find them.

The sentence has incorrect word order in questions embedded in statements; 'where is my key' should be 'where my key is'. Also, 'headphone' should be plural 'headphones' to match context. 'It's a small stuff' is incorrect; 'stuff' is uncountable, so 'small items' is better. 'I never can find it' should be 'I can never find them' for correct adverb placement and pronoun agreement.

× Because I'm quite often forgot about something important.

✓ Because I quite often forget about something important.

The verb 'forgot' is past tense, but the sentence refers to a habitual action, so present tense 'forget' is needed. Also, 'I'm quite often' is incorrect; 'I quite often' is correct.

× For instance, when I was planning my vacation, I forgot to book a taxi to the airport.

✓ For instance, when I was planning my vacation, I forgot to book a taxi to the airport.

This sentence is correct in past tense and needs no correction.

× As a result, on the day of my flight, all the drivers were busy and I couldn't find a car.

✓ As a result, on the day of my flight, all the drivers were busy and I couldn't find a car.

This sentence is correct in past tense and needs no correction.

× I was really worried that I might miss my flight and ruin my vacation.

✓ I was really worried that I might miss my flight and ruin my vacation.

This sentence is correct in past tense and needs no correction.

× As I'm a student, I always need to remember my schedule at university, my homework and also about my project which I need to do in university.

✓ As I'm a student, I always need to remember my schedule at university, my homework, and also my project which I need to do at university.

The phrase 'remember about my project' is incorrect; 'remember' does not require 'about'. Also, 'in university' is better as 'at university' to indicate location.

× At the same time I'm a worker, so I need to remember about my project at work and when I need to be at work.

✓ At the same time, I'm a worker, so I need to remember my project at work and when I need to be at work.

Again, 'remember about my project' is incorrect; 'remember' should be followed directly by the object without 'about'.

× I try to do notice in the my phones or in the notebook.

✓ I try to make notes on my phone or in a notebook.

The phrase 'do notice' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'make notes'. Also, 'in the my phones' is incorrect; it should be 'on my phone'. 'Notebook' needs an article 'a'.

× I try to do notice in the my phones or in the notebook.

✓ I try to make notes on my phone or in a notebook.

The phrase 'the my phones' is incorrect; 'my phone' is correct without 'the'.

× I think it's help me to remember old stuff which I need.

✓ I think it helps me to remember old stuff that I need.

'It's help me' is incorrect; the verb should be 'helps' to agree with 'it'. Also, 'which I need' is better as 'that I need' in this context.