Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“memory things”应为“memorising things”。回答较为冗长且含有填充词，建议简洁明了地表达观点，并使用更准确的词汇。

예시: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. However, I admire people who can remember information quickly and accurately, and I wish I had that ability.

제안: 回答中有语法和表达不准确的问题，如“some important thing”应为“something important”。建议使用更自然的表达，并避免重复。

예시: I don't think I've ever forgotten anything important because I always write important things down in my notes or on my phone to help me remember.

제안: 回答中有语法错误，如“since I my memory is not good”应为“since my memory is not good”。回答中有重复和填充词，建议简洁且结构清晰地表达。

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember important tasks that I have to complete. Since my memory isn't very good, I write everything down to make sure I don't forget anything.

제안: 回答表达基本清晰，但有语法错误，如“make A to do list”应为“make a to-do list”，句子结构不完整。建议注意冠词使用和句子完整性。

예시: I usually make a to-do list in the morning and try to stay focused and organized. This helps me reduce stress because my academic work can be very demanding.

× I'm not really good at memory things.

✓ I'm not really good at memorising things.

这里'memory things'用法不正确，应该用动名词'memorising things'表示记忆的动作。'memory'是名词，不能直接修饰'things'。

× I always write some important thing on my notes or on my phone, so I don't think I have ever forgotten some important thing, although my memory skill is not that good.

✓ I always write important things in my notes or on my phone, so I don't think I have ever forgotten anything important, although my memory skills are not that good.

'some important thing'用法不当，应该用复数形式'important things'或不定代词'anything'。另外，'notes'前应使用介词'in'，'memory skill'应为复数'memory skills'。

× since I my memory is not good, I usually write everything down on my notes and uh to ensure I don't forget anything important.

✓ since my memory is not good, I usually write everything down in my notes to ensure I don't forget anything important.

句中'I my memory'重复，应去掉'I'。另外，'write down on my notes'应改为'write down in my notes'。

× I usually make A to do list in the morning and try to stay focused and organized.

✓ I usually make a to-do list in the morning and try to stay focused and organized.

'A to do list'中，'to do list'是一个固定短语，前面应加不定冠词'a'，且'to do'应连字符连接为'to-do'。

× sometimes I have a lot of things to do in my academic work is demanding.

✓ sometimes I have a lot of things to do because my academic work is demanding.

原句结构混乱，缺少连接词，导致句子不完整。应加连接词'because'使句子完整通顺。