Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答は質問に直接答えていますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が見られます。例えば、「when I was high school student」は「when I was a high school student」が正しいです。また、「memorize everything and speedily」は不自然なので、「memorize things quickly」などにすると良いでしょう。より自然で効果的な表現を心がけてください。

예시: Yes, I am good at memorizing things. When I was a high school student, I used to memorize new English words regularly, which helped me achieve high scores in my tests. Therefore, I believe I can memorize things quickly and effectively.

제안: 回答は質問に答えていますが、文法や発音の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくい部分があります。例えば、「O2 years ago」は「Two years ago」、「a great a big meeting」は「a big meeting」、「I was very said sorry」は「I was very sorry」など、正しい表現に直す必要があります。より明確で自然な表現を使いましょう。

예시: Yes, I have forgotten something important. For example, two years ago, I missed a big meeting in my class, and I felt very sorry about it.

제안: 回答は質問に答えていますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。例えば、「a important things」は「an important thing」、「if I missed it's very fault in my bed so I think」は意味が不明瞭です。より簡潔で明確な表現を心がけ、文法を正しく使いましょう。

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember my daily tasks because they are important. If I forget them, it can cause problems for me.

제안: 回答は質問に答えていますが、文法や語彙の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。例えば、「I always light my tasks on my paper」は「I always write my tasks on paper」、「I checked the list」は時制の不一致、「it's very good tools」は単数・複数の不一致などがあります。より自然で正確な表現を使いましょう。

예시: I always write my tasks on paper and check the list regularly. This method helps me remember what I need to do clearly and effectively.

× Yes, I'm good at memorizing things because when I was high school student I always memorize the new words of English and I got a great score in my test, so I think I can memorize everything and speedily.

✓ Yes, I'm good at memorizing things because when I was a high school student I always memorized new English words and I got a great score on my test, so I think I can memorize everything quickly.

The sentence contains past tense errors. 'I always memorize' should be 'I always memorized' to match the past time frame. Also, 'a high school student' needs the article 'a'. 'New words of English' is better expressed as 'new English words'. 'Speedily' is an adverb but 'quickly' is more natural here. 'Got a great score in my test' should be 'got a great score on my test' because 'score on a test' is the correct collocation.

× Yes, I have forgotten something. Oh for example O2 years ago I forgot a great a big meeting in my classes. So I was very said sorry.

✓ Yes, I have forgotten something. For example, two years ago I forgot a very big meeting in my class. So I was very sorry.

The sentence has past tense and word choice errors. 'O2' should be 'two'. 'A great a big meeting' is redundant; 'a very big meeting' is correct. 'In my classes' should be 'in my class' if referring to one class. 'I was very said sorry' is incorrect; 'I was very sorry' is correct. 'Said' is not used as an adjective here.

× In my daily life I need to remember my daily tasks because it is a important things I have to do and if I missed it's very fault in my bed so I think.

✓ In my daily life, I need to remember my daily tasks because they are important things I have to do, and if I miss them, it's a big fault on my part, I think.

The sentence has quantifier and article errors. 'A important things' is incorrect; 'important things' is plural and should not have 'a'. 'If I missed' should be 'if I miss' to match present tense. 'It's very fault in my bed' is unclear; 'it's a big fault on my part' is a better expression. Also, 'tasks' is plural, so pronouns and verbs should agree.

× I always light my tasks on my paper and I checked the list. It can be very helpful to remember my tasks I need to do, so it's very good tools. It can very clearly.

✓ I always write my tasks on my paper and check the list. It can be very helpful to remember the tasks I need to do, so it's a very good tool. It works very clearly.

The sentence has preposition and word choice errors. 'Light my tasks' is incorrect; 'write my tasks' is correct. 'I checked the list' should be 'I check the list' to maintain present tense. 'It's very good tools' is incorrect because 'tools' is plural but 'it's' is singular; it should be 'it's a very good tool'. 'It can very clearly' is incomplete; 'It works very clearly' or 'It helps very clearly' is better.