Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答が不自然で文法的な誤りが多いです。特に"thinking some things at once"の表現が不明瞭で、文が途切れているため、意味が伝わりにくいです。より自然で簡潔な表現を心がけ、文を完結させることが重要です。

예시: No, I'm not very good at memorizing things because I find it hard to focus on multiple things at the same time.

제안: 内容は伝わりますが、"I was scored by my mother"は不自然な表現です。"scolded"を使うべきです。また、文の構造を改善し、より具体的な詳細を加えると良いでしょう。

예시: Yes, I once forgot my father's birthday, and my mother scolded me for it, reminding me to be more careful next time.

제안: 文が途中で終わっており、意味が不明瞭です。"my boyfriend's"の後に名詞が抜けているようです。完全な文を作り、具体的な理由や感情を加えると良いでしょう。

예시: In my opinion, I need to remember my anniversary day with my boyfriend because it's a special day that we celebrate every year.

제안: "by right on my schedule notes"は不自然な表現です。"by writing"が正しいです。また、文章をより流暢にし、具体的な方法を詳しく説明すると良いでしょう。

예시: I always remember important things by writing them down in my schedule and also putting notes on the wall where I can see them easily.

× No, I'm poor at memorizing things. That's because I'm not good at thinking some things. At. Once and.

✓ No, I'm poor at memorizing things because I'm not good at thinking about some things at once.

The original sentences are fragmented and incorrectly punctuated, causing confusion. Combining them into one coherent sentence with proper prepositions and removing unnecessary periods improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes I have. I have an experience that I forgot my father's birthday, so I was scored by my mother not to forget again.

✓ Yes, I have. I once forgot my father's birthday, so my mother scolded me not to forget again.

The phrase 'I have an experience that I forgot' is awkward and incorrect; 'I once forgot' is more natural. Also, 'was scored by my mother' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'scolded'. Past tense verbs must be used correctly to describe past events.

× In my opinion, I have to remember my anniversary day with my boyfriend's because it's only a day that I.

✓ In my opinion, I have to remember my anniversary day with my boyfriend because it's the only day that I...

The phrase 'with my boyfriend's' incorrectly uses the possessive form; it should be 'with my boyfriend'. Also, the sentence is incomplete and should be finished for clarity. The preposition 'with' is correctly used here.

× I always remember important things by right on my schedule notes and also I write on my paper and put on the wall.

✓ I always remember important things by writing them on my schedule notes, and I also write them on paper and put it on the wall.

The phrase 'by right on my schedule notes' is incorrect; the gerund form 'writing' should be used after 'by'. Also, 'write on my paper' is vague; 'write them on paper' is clearer. Prepositions and verb forms must be used correctly to convey meaning.