Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时应更自然流畅，避免重复和语法错误。可以直接回答问题，然后用具体例子支持。

예시: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things related to my daily routine, such as my schedule and tasks. However, I find it harder to remember poems or numbers because they require more effort to memorise.

제안: 回答不够清晰，语法和表达有误。应直接回答问题，并用具体细节说明。

예시: I have never forgotten anything important, especially when it comes to my studies. I always complete my learning tasks and follow guidelines on time to avoid forgetting anything crucial.

제안: 回答应更连贯，注意语法和词汇的准确使用，避免重复。

예시: Currently, I need to remember my English study schedule and the tasks assigned by my school, such as experiments and their causes.

제안: 回答较好，但表达可以更自然，使用更合适的连接词和词汇。

예시: I usually repeat important information in my mind several times to remember it. Moreover, if something is very important, I take notes on my phone and review them regularly during my free time.

× Yes, if it's about my routine life, I would remember them very well.

✓ Yes, if it's about my routine life, I would remember it very well.

这里的'my routine life'是单数，代词应使用单数形式'it'，而不是复数'them'。

× However, if it's about the poems or numbers or other things, I would have a worse memory.

✓ However, if it's about poems or numbers or other things, I would have a worse memory.

在列举多个名词时，'poems'和'numbers'应使用复数形式，前面不需要加定冠词'the'。

× No other liver was something important for me is about the learning tasks and guidelines.

✓ Nothing else was more important to me than the learning tasks and guidelines.

原句结构混乱，表达不清。应使用'Nothing else was more important to me than...'来表达没有其他事情比学习任务和指导更重要。

× However, I always meet them ahead of time, so I didn't forget about something important about the learning.

✓ However, I always complete them ahead of time, so I didn't forget anything important about the learning.

'meet'用法不当，应改为'complete'表示完成任务；'something important'改为'anything important'更符合否定句语境。

× At present, for me I need to learn about the English, so I need remember the routine tasks about my learning plan and what's more, it's the school task about the causes and experiment.

✓ At present, I need to learn English, so I need to remember the routine tasks in my learning plan, and what's more, the school tasks about causes and experiments.

'learn about the English'应改为'learn English'；'need remember'应为'need to remember'；'school task'应为复数'tasks'；'causes and experiment'应为'causes and experiments'。

× I would recollect them in my brain over and over again since it began.

✓ I would recollect them in my brain over and over again since it began.

此句语法无误，但表达不够自然。建议改为'I have been recollecting them in my mind over and over again since it began.'以符合时间表达。

× What's more, if it's too important to forget, I would take notes in my phone and I would check the in my spare time periodically.

✓ What's more, if it's too important to forget, I would take notes on my phone and check them in my spare time periodically.

'take notes in my phone'应为'take notes on my phone'；'check the'缺少宾语，应为'check them'。