Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答较为自然且内容丰富，但句子较长且有些重复，建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，同时使用更多连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: Yes, I have a good memory. For example, I can quickly memorize numbers and dates. Also, I often remember many details about my daily life and friends.

제안: 语法错误较多，如时态和用词错误，表达不够连贯，建议注意时态一致性，使用合适的连接词，并简化表达。

예시: Yes, I have forgotten something important. For instance, I once forgot my best friend's 16th birthday. I felt very sorry and apologized by buying her a gift.

제안: 回答内容具体，但表达稍显啰嗦，建议减少口语化词汇，使用更准确的词汇，并注意句子结构的简洁性。

예시: As a high school student, I need to remember the knowledge from my AP classes. Besides, I also try to learn useful life skills, such as cooking and baking.

제안: 时态使用不当，句子结构不够自然，建议注意时态一致，使用更地道的表达方式，并增加连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: When I was a child, I used to read important information many times to remember it. However, now I use smartphone apps like calendars and to-do lists, which help me a lot.

× Yes, I have forgot something really important before.

✓ Yes, I have forgotten something really important before.

这里使用的是现在完成时，助动词have后面应该接过去分词forgotten，而不是一般过去式forgot。

× Once I forget my best friend's birthday, I feel really sorry to her because we're such close friends.

✓ Once I forgot my best friend's birthday, I felt really sorry for her because we're such close friends.

这里描述过去发生的事情，应该用一般过去时forget改为forgot，feel改为felt。同时，表达对某人感到抱歉应使用feel sorry for，而不是feel sorry to。

× And how can I forgot her 16th birthday?

✓ And how could I forget her 16th birthday?

这里是对过去事件的反问，情态动词用过去式could，动词用原形forget，而不是can和forgot。

× I feel very apologized to her and then buy a new gift.

✓ I feel very sorry to her and then bought a new gift.

apologized是动词过去分词，不能用作形容词表达感受，应该用形容词sorry。表达对某人感到抱歉用feel sorry to改为feel sorry for。另外，动作发生在过去，buy改为过去式bought。

× You know, I'm a high school student now, so I think the most important thing I have to remember in my daily life is the knowledge about my AP classes and also some skills, some useful skills in People's Daily life, like how to cook and to bake a cake like this.

✓ You know, I'm a high school student now, so I think the most important thing I have to remember in my daily life is the knowledge about my AP classes and also some skills, some useful skills in people's daily life, like how to cook and bake a cake like this.

这里people's daily life中的People's不应该大写，且to bake中的to不需要，动词并列时第二个动词用原形即可。

× I remember that when I was a child, every time I faced the important things to remember, I will read it for a lot of time.

✓ I remember that when I was a child, every time I faced important things to remember, I would read them many times.

表达过去习惯用would，不能用will。important things前不需要the，read it改为read them，因为things是复数。for a lot of time表达不自然，改为many times更合适。

× But now I have a smartphone so I will use some apps like calendars and To Do List to remember on this.

✓ But now I have a smartphone so I use some apps like calendars and To Do List to remember things.

remember后面不需要介词on，这里用remember things更自然。will改为一般现在时use，因为是习惯性动作。

× This kind of apps helps me a lot.

✓ This kind of app helps me a lot.

this kind of后面接单数名词app，动词用单数helps。