Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to give a clear and complete answer directly related to the question. Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear ideas. Use simple linking words to connect your ideas logically and keep your answer within 5 sentences.

예시: Yes, I am not very good at memorising things because I often forget small details. For example, once my father asked me to bring the house keys, but I forgot them. This shows that I need to improve my memory skills.

제안: Try to avoid hesitation sounds like 'uh' and give a more confident and clear answer. Use linking words to explain your reason and provide specific examples to support your answer.

예시: No, I have never forgotten something important because I always pay close attention when someone asks me to bring important items. For instance, I always remember to bring my keys or wallet when I leave the house.

제안: Make your answer clearer and more structured. Use linking words like 'because' to explain reasons and avoid incomplete sentences. Try to be specific about what you need to remember and why.

예시: I need to remember to pray on time every day because I often get busy with many tasks. Therefore, I ask someone to remind me so I don't miss my prayers.

제안: Answer the question directly and clearly. Use complete sentences and explain your method of remembering important things with specific details. Avoid hesitation and unclear phrases.

예시: I remember important things by writing notes or setting reminders on my phone. For example, I set a reminder for birthdays so I don't forget to wish my friends.

× Actually, that's a good question 'cause I always forgot a lot of things around me.

✓ Actually, that's a good question because I always forget a lot of things around me.

The verb 'forgot' is in the past tense, but the sentence refers to a habitual action, so the present tense 'forget' should be used instead.

× For example, once my father told me to bring the keys from our house.

✓ For example, once my father told me to bring the keys from our house.

This sentence is correct as it refers to a specific past event, so the past tense 'told' is appropriate.

× So I go, I want to. The.

✓ So I went because I wanted to.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. It needs to be restructured to form a complete and meaningful sentence.

× Actually not yet, uh, because uh, I always focus when the other people told me to bring important things and uh, take uh, uh, important memory or important, uh, keys or anything.

✓ Actually, not yet, because I always focus when other people tell me to bring important things and take important memories or keys or anything.

The sentence mixes past and present tenses incorrectly. 'Told' should be 'tell' to match the habitual present action, and 'take' is correct in base form after 'and'.

× Actually I need to arrive to someone to remind me pray every Salah in his in her in time 'cause I always forget to do it in time because I actually have a lot of things in my mind to do and I all.

✓ Actually, I need someone to remind me to pray every Salah on time because I always forget to do it on time since I have a lot of things on my mind to do.

The phrase 'arrive to someone' is incorrect; it should be 'need someone'. Also, 'remind me pray' should be 'remind me to pray'. Prepositions 'in his in her in time' are incorrect; 'on time' is the correct phrase. The sentence is also restructured for clarity.

× Are you duly remember birthday things when I got some uh. Mention or sign on it to keep it in my mind all the day.

✓ I usually remember birthdays when I get some mention or sign on them to keep them in my mind all day.

The original sentence is unclear and incorrectly structured. 'Are you duly remember' is incorrect; it should be 'I usually remember'. Also, 'birthday things' is vague; 'birthdays' is clearer. The sentence is rephrased for clarity and grammatical correctness.